Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答をもっと簡潔で自然な英語にし、文法的に正しい構造を使ってください。トピックセンテンスで好みを明確に述べ、その後で理由を1〜2文で具体的に説明しましょう。冗長な繰り返し（“typing typing”など）を避け、語順や時制に注意してください。また、接続詞（because, so, thereforeなど）を使って論理的につなげると良いです。例えば、コンピュータのスペルチェックや文法チェックが役立つ点を明確に述べてください。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because spell-check and grammar tools help me spot mistakes quickly. For example, when I type an English sentence, my computer highlights errors so I can correct them and learn faster.

제안: 質問にはまず簡潔に答え（Yes/Noではなく具体的に）、次にどの機器を使っているか明確に述べてください。余計な短いフレーズ（“I learn, no?”）は避け、理由や頻度を一文で付け加えると良いです。語彙は正確に（laptop, desktop, phoneなど）使い、慣用表現は控えめに。接続詞で文章を滑らかに繋ぎましょう。

예시: Yes, I use a laptop every day for writing in English because its keyboard is comfortable and I can type much faster than with a phone.

제안: まず時期を明確に述べ、その後でどの言語で学んだかや学習方法を整理して説明してください。文法（過去形、冠詞、語順）を正しく使い、冗長な語句を減らして情報を論理的に並べると良いです。具体例（使っているアプリやゲーム名、練習の頻度）を加えると内容が豊かになります。

예시: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. I first practiced typing in Japanese at school, and later I taught myself to type in English using apps and online typing games every day.

제안: 改善方法を順序立てて、簡潔に述べてください。まず主要な方法（アプリ、ウェブサイト、ゲーム、友達との競争）を列挙し、それぞれに短い具体的な説明（頻度、効果、どのように競うか）を付け加えると説得力が増します。文法（現在進行形や一般動詞）と代名詞の使い分けに注意してください。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on apps and websites daily. I also play competitive typing games with friends to increase my speed, and we compare scores to see who improves the most.

× I prefer type typing typing because if I'm some when I studying English, if I'm handwriting, I cannot realize which grammar I mistake or not.

✓ I prefer typing because when I'm studying English, if I handwrite, I cannot realize which grammar mistakes I make.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing): 'prefer typing'. Use 'when I'm studying' for present continuous time clause. 'Handwrite' is the verb form, not 'handwriting' as a verb here. Use plural 'mistakes' for countable errors and 'make' as the correct verb collocation ('make mistakes').

× Like if I'm typing the computer system tell me this grammar is different, this grammar is good.

✓ For example, when I type, the computer tells me which grammar is wrong and which is correct.

Use 'when I type' (simple present for general habit). 'Computer tells me' requires third person singular verb 'tells'. Replace vague 'this grammar is different, this grammar is good' with clear phrases 'which grammar is wrong and which is correct'.

× Yes I do. I'm typing to laptop for iOS writing every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop every day to write in English.

For habitual actions use simple present 'I type'. 'Type on a laptop' is correct prepositional phrase. 'I'm typing to laptop' is incorrect. Clarify purpose: 'to write in English' rather than 'for iOS writing'.

× It's really easy to type. I learn, no?

✓ It's really easy to type. I'm learning, right?

'I learn, no?' is an ungrammatical direct translation. Use present continuous 'I'm learning' for an ongoing process and tag question 'right?' to confirm.

× I learned to typing in when I was elementary school student.

✓ I learned to type when I was an elementary school student.

Use infinitive 'to type' after 'learned to'. Remove extra 'in'. Include article 'an' before 'elementary school student'.

× I started learning typing in Japanese and but I learned English one by myself.

✓ I started learning typing in Japanese, but I learned English by myself.

Do not use both 'and' and 'but' together; choose 'but' for contrast. Use 'by myself' for alone rather than 'one by myself'.

× I use application or website every day and game play game with friends typing game.

✓ I use applications or websites every day and play typing games with friends.

Use plural 'applications or websites' for general habit. Use verb 'play typing games' and plural 'games'. Remove redundant words 'game play game' and correct word order.

× I said before but I'm using up application or website and racing with my friends and we are.

✓ As I said before, I'm using apps or websites and racing with my friends.

Remove unnecessary 'up' and trailing 'and we are'. Use 'as I said before' for reference. 'Apps or websites' is natural and 'racing with my friends' completes the thought.

× Doing game with her and we're deciding which who won like score.

✓ We play games with her and decide who won by comparing scores.

Start sentence with subject 'We'. Use 'play games with her' and 'decide who won' (not 'which who won'). 'By comparing scores' clarifies the method. Replace informal 'like score' with 'by comparing scores'.