Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and remove redundant connectors (e.g., "but" after "because"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words such as "because" or "for example." Avoid vague phrases like "something like that."

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I write a letter or take notes by hand, I find the process more meaningful and I retain the content longer.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence naming the device, then add one or two specific details with linking words. Remove filler phrases like "I think" and clarify the purposes concisely.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. I bought a MacBook last summer and use it mainly for school work research and for entertainment, such as browsing websites and watching videos.

제안: Provide a clear, single-topic answer with a specific time and avoid hesitations. Use linking words to add a brief supporting detail (where or how you learned). Eliminate repeated phrases and unfinished clauses.

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary three or four at school. I first used the keyboard during computer lessons, where we practiced basic typing exercises.

제안: Begin with a clear statement of methods, then give specific examples and use linking words like "for example" or "also." Prefer precise verbs and correct tense ("improve" vs "improved").

예시: I improve my typing by using online platforms that offer speed exercises and lessons. For example, I use typing practice websites to increase accuracy, and I also type long messages on social media to build speed and fluency.

× For me, I would prefer handwriting over typing because although some people would think that typing is faster and more effective, but in my opinion handwriting is more familiar and you can feel the warmth when you maybe write a letter or something like that.

✓ For me, I would prefer handwriting over typing because although some people think that typing is faster and more effective, in my opinion handwriting is more familiar and you can feel the warmth when you write a letter or something like that.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'because' and 'but' together, creating a conjunction error and redundancy. Also 'would think' and 'maybe write' are unnecessary modal or hedging forms that weaken the statement. Suggestion: use only one subordinating conjunction ('because' or 'although' with inversion of clauses) and simplify verb forms to present simple ('think', 'write') to match the general present-tense opinion context.

× Yes I do, I think I bought my MacBook last summer and after that I have been using it every day and just typing on it to search on the Internet for my school work so for entertainment.

✓ Yes I do. I think I bought my MacBook last summer, and after that I have used it every day, typing on it to search the Internet for my schoolwork and for entertainment.

Mixing simple past ('bought') with present perfect continuous ('have been using') is acceptable but the original phrasing is awkward and has tense consistency and word choice issues. Use present perfect ('have used') to emphasize the continuing action from past to present. Also 'search on the Internet for my school work' should be 'search the Internet for my schoolwork.' Split into clearer clauses for fluency.

× It was really a long time ago. Let me think I think I've first been in contact with the keyboard is like during my primary 3 or primary four and my first time experiencing typing is in my computer lesson, which is.

✓ It was a long time ago. Let me think. I first came into contact with a keyboard in primary three or primary four, and my first experience of typing was in my computer lesson.

The original contains awkward sentence fragments and incorrect word order ('I've first been in contact' and 'my first time experiencing typing is in'). These are sentence structure errors. Use simple past or past perfect constructions appropriately: 'I first came into contact' and 'my first experience of typing was' are clear and grammatically correct. Remove trailing incomplete clause and split into sentences for clarity.

× I would improve my typing by accessing the online platforms to practice my typing speed or I would just use the social media to communicate with my friends and when I'm communicating I have to type a long text and that really enhance my typing skills.

✓ I would improve my typing by using online platforms to practice my typing speed, or I would use social media to communicate with my friends, and when I'm communicating I have to type long texts and that really enhances my typing skills.

Errors include incorrect verb forms: 'accessing the online platforms' is acceptable but 'use the social media' should be 'use social media.' 'Type a long text' should be plural 'type long texts' to match habitual action. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'that' referring to the activity. Suggestions: use gerund or infinitive consistently ('using' or 'to use'), make nouns uncountable where appropriate ('social media'), and ensure subject-verb agreement in present tense.