Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and natural by starting with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid filler phrases like "you know" and repeated ideas.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and my text is much easier to read. For example, when I take notes on my laptop during lectures I can type quickly and organize points clearly, which saves time when I review them later.

제안: Open with a direct statement about which device you use, then give a specific reason and time frame. Reduce repetition ("type very much") and use clearer linking words.

예시: I type on my laptop every day, especially at the moment because I'm finishing my thesis, which is due at the end of this month. As a result I spend several hours each day writing and revising chapters.

제안: Give a clear time reference in your topic sentence, then explain one or two specific activities that helped you improve. Correct word choices ("PowerPoint", "Microsoft Word") and avoid vague phrases like "got better and better."

예시: I learned to type as a child after my father bought me a computer. I practised by browsing the internet and using programs like Microsoft Word and PowerPoint, which helped me gradually improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Start with a direct statement about your main method for improvement, then give a specific routine or technique and a clear result. Remove filler and correct grammar ("the way my school made us type").

예시: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: school assignments and daily typing tasks force me to type frequently. For instance, doing timed typing exercises and writing essays has increased both my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing because I'm very fast in it and I think that other people can read what I write better.

✓ I prefer typing because I'm very fast at it and I think that other people can read what I write more easily.

Use of preposition 'in' with 'fast' is incorrect; 'fast at' is correct. Also 'better' in this context compares reading ease; 'more easily' (adverb) correctly modifies 'read'. Improve by using correct preposition and adverb form: 'fast at it' and 'more easily'.

× And you know, I think that my handwriting is not very good, so typing is a better option for me.

✓ You know, I think that my handwriting is not very good, so typing is a better option for me.

Starting with 'And' is informal and unnecessary; not a strict grammatical error but style. Removing 'And' makes the sentence cleaner. Pronoun usage otherwise correct. Suggest beginning the sentence directly with 'You know' in spoken responses.

× Yes, especially recently I've been typing a lot on my laptop due to my thesis that should be done until the end of this month, so I need to type very much every day.

✓ Yes. Especially recently I've been typing a lot on my laptop because my thesis should be finished by the end of this month, so I need to type a great deal every day.

'Should be done until' is incorrect phrasing; use 'should be finished by' to indicate a deadline. 'Type very much' is unnatural; use 'type a great deal' or 'type a lot'. Also split into two clauses for clarity. Suggest using 'by' for deadlines and natural quantifiers.

× It goes back to my childhood when my father bought me a computer, so I really enjoy surfing the net or use different programs, especially like Microsoft boards or PowerPoints, so my typing got better and better.

✓ It goes back to my childhood when my father bought me a computer, so I really enjoyed surfing the net and using different programs, especially things like Microsoft Word or PowerPoint, and my typing got better and better.

Sequence and tense mix: 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed' to match 'bought' and 'goes back'. Parallel structure error: use 'surfing... and using' not 'surfing... or use'. 'Microsoft boards' is wrong product name; use 'Microsoft Word' and 'PowerPoint'. Improve parallel verbs and consistent past tense for past events.

× And due to my homework back in schools, I have to type.

✓ Because of my homework back in school, I had to type.

'Due to' at sentence start is acceptable but 'back in schools' is incorrect; use 'back in school' (singular) to refer to the period of schooling. Also context refers to past so 'have to' should be 'had to'. Suggest 'Because of my homework back in school, I had to type.'

× So the more I type, the better I get.

✓ So the more I typed, the better I got.

Context describes past schooling causing improvement; use past tense 'typed' and 'got' to match timeframe. If speaker intends present general truth, original is fine; here surrounding sentences indicate past, so adjust tenses for consistency.

× And sometimes I think that forcing can lead to improvement and the way that that my school forced us to type make me better and better.

✓ Sometimes I think that being forced can lead to improvement, and the way my school forced us to type made me better and better.

Several issues: duplicate 'that that' should be one 'that' or rephrased; 'forcing' alone is unclear — use 'being forced'. Subject-verb agreement: 'way... make' should be 'made' to match past tense and singular subject; 'made me better and better' keeps intended meaning. Remove leading 'And' for clarity.