Part 1
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
수험생
MMM, sometime I prefer, uh, handwriting because no, sometime I I would like a writing and I always prefer typing because the typing is a very easy to weigh how to contact and handwriting design.
시험관
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
수험생
Uh, I do type on uh, laptop, uh, everyday uh, because I have a laptop and all work and all typing uh, on laptop everyday.
시험관
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
수험생
Uh, I did learn in my +2 class, uh, uh, and uh, someone period, uh, one period my in my school is computer period. And they will, uh, always my teacher always, uh, will always, uh, typing on.
시험관
How do you improve your typing?
수험생
Uh, my uh, typing improved in uh school time and college time because, uh, my old uh, assignment I typing in my laptop and that's why I improve my handwriting.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
점수: 42.0제안: Be clearer and more concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / however). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles, and word choice).
예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and easier to edit. However, sometimes I handwrite notes when I want to remember things better because writing by hand helps me focus.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
점수: 50.0제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and give a brief reason or example. Improve fluency by removing filler sounds (uh, um) and correct small grammar errors (every day vs everyday).
예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I use it for study and work. For example, I write essays, read emails, and take notes on my laptop during classes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
점수: 35.0제안: Provide a clear time reference and a concise description of how you learned. Use correct tense and reduce repetitions. For coherence, use linking words like when or during and mention the teacher or class as a specific detail.
예시: I learned to type when I was in grade 12 during a computer class. The teacher gave us regular typing exercises in that class, which helped me develop speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
점수: 40.0제안: Explain a clear method you used to improve typing and give a specific example of practice or tools. Use correct vocabulary (typing, not handwriting) and link ideas with because/so/for example. Avoid confusing statements.
예시: I improved my typing during school and college by practicing regularly on assignments and using online typing tests. For example, I practiced 20 minutes a day on a typing website, which increased my speed and reduced errors.
× 'MMM, sometime I prefer, uh, handwriting because no, sometime I I would like a writing and I always prefer typing because the typing is a very easy to weigh how to contact and handwriting design.'
✓ 'Sometimes I prefer handwriting because sometimes I would like to write, but I always prefer typing because typing is an easy way to format and contact people, and handwriting has a different style.'
'Problems: run-on sentence, unclear structure, wrong word choice, and repetition. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestions: break into shorter sentences, use correct words (write instead of a writing, way instead of weigh, format instead of contact if meaning layout), and remove repeated words. Maintain consistent adverb form: sometimes. Use parallel structure: "I prefer X because... but I prefer Y because...".'},{