Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but slightly wordy and has minor unnatural phrasing (“takes a little effort to be able to complete words and sentences”). Make the response more natural by using a concise topic sentence, one clear reason, and a brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrases like “for me I prefer.”

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. I type most of my work and emails, so it is faster and more convenient for me, especially when I need to edit or share documents quickly.

제안: The answer communicates the idea but has hesitations and small errors (“I TA type”), repetition, and slightly fragmented sentences. Remove hesitations, combine ideas with linking words, and correct small mistakes. Keep it to about two to three sentences with smooth linking.

예시: I type on my laptop every day. Because I write emails and documents for work, using a laptop is convenient and portable, and it makes sharing files with remote colleagues easy.

제안: Good level of detail, but the sentence is long and slightly repetitive (“we were introduced” twice). Use a clear topic sentence stating when you learned, then add one or two concise supporting details. Use correct prepositions ("in second grade") and avoid unnecessary background unless it adds value.

예시: I learned to type in second grade when our school introduced basic computer lessons. Back then we even learned about floppy disks, which shows how early I started using keyboards.

제안: The answer gives useful methods but contains a typo (“MA mastery skills”) and repetitive ideas. Be specific about resources and give one clear method with a brief reason. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same phrase.

예시: I improve my typing by using online typing practice sites to build speed and accuracy. In addition, I use my laptop daily so I become familiar with the keyboard layout and muscle memory improves over time.

× As of the moment, I like typing more.

✓ At the moment, I prefer typing.

'As of the moment' is an awkward phrasing; 'at the moment' is the correct idiom. 'I like typing more' is comparative but lacks a clear comparison; 'I prefer typing' is concise and appropriate. Use 'prefer' to express preference.

× Typing takes a little effort to be able to complete words and sentences, and I usually use my computer for work, so for me I prefer typing.

✓ Typing takes a little effort to complete words and sentences, and I usually use my computer for work, so I prefer typing.

The infinitive phrase 'to be able to complete' is wordy and unnecessary; 'to complete' is sufficient. 'For me I prefer' is redundant; use simply 'I prefer.' Remove extra words to improve clarity and grammatical flow.

× I TA type on my laptop keyboard every single day.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every single day.

'TA' appears to be a typographical error inserted into the sentence. Removing it yields a grammatical sentence. Always proofread to eliminate stray characters.

× I use my laptop for work, especially when I write emails, when I write documents.

✓ I use my laptop for work, especially when I write emails or documents.

Repeating 'when I write' is redundant. Combine with 'emails or documents' for concise parallel structure. Maintain parallelism when listing similar actions.

× And I think it's pretty convenient to use a laptop because it's handy and also you can share a lot of files even when you are remote.

✓ I think it's convenient to use a laptop because it's portable, and you can share many files even when you are working remotely.

'Handy' is informal; 'portable' is more precise. 'A lot of files' is colloquial; 'many files' is more appropriate. 'When you are remote' should be 'when you are working remotely' for clarity. Adjust pronoun use and word choice to improve formality and clarity.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in my elementary days, specifically on the second grade, we were introduced to computers, we were introduced to floppy disks, and during those times computers were widely promoted.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in elementary school, specifically in second grade. We were introduced to computers and floppy disks, and at that time computers were widely promoted.

'My elementary days' is not idiomatic; use 'elementary school.' Use 'in second grade' not 'on the second grade.' Sentence run-on: split into two sentences. 'During those times' is wordy; 'at that time' is correct. Improve article use and sentence boundaries for clarity.

× There are a lot of websites for you to practice your typing MA mastery skills.

✓ There are many websites where you can practice your typing mastery skills.

'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is preferable. 'For you to practice' is wordy; 'where you can practice' is smoother. 'MA' appears to be an error; remove it. Ensure quantifiers and phrasing are appropriate and concise.

× Also, it is best to use a laptop every day so you get accustomed to it.

✓ Also, it's best to use a laptop every day so you become accustomed to it.

'Get accustomed' is understandable but 'become accustomed' is more natural in this context. Maintain present simple for general advice but use the collocation 'become accustomed.'

× You get accustomed to the feel of typing and I believe that's how you master.

✓ You become accustomed to the feel of typing, and I believe that's how you master it.

Use 'become accustomed' rather than 'get accustomed' for a more natural collocation. 'That's how you master' is incomplete; add 'it' to specify the object (typing). Ensure sentences are complete and include the direct object when needed.