Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce grammar errors and redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetitions (e.g., "typing on laptop" repeated) and correct grammar ("much more faster" -> "much faster"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing on a laptop because it is much faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can edit long assignments quickly and share them with classmates, and I also find it easier to format and save my work for future use.

제안: Be more concise and correct verb forms. Start with a direct answer, then give specific daily uses and one clear benefit. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas, and avoid vague phrases like "mainly I use for studies during my works."

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use it for studying, writing assignments and sharing documents with friends, and because I practice regularly it has improved my speed and accuracy, which helps when I need to type long reports.

제안: Correct tense and avoid repetition. Answer the question directly with a time reference, then briefly explain context. Avoid repeating reasons already given unless adding a new point. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

예시: I learned to type in primary school during computer classes, so I started practicing basic skills at about age eight. I still type every day now for work and study, which has helped me maintain and improve those skills.

제안: Use present tense when describing ongoing habits and avoid repeated phrases. Give specific practice methods (e.g., timed tests, online courses) and link causes/results clearly. Fix grammar ("I improved" -> "I improve" or "I have improved").

예시: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly: I do timed typing tests online and work on accuracy drills. In addition, I type essays and emails daily and sometimes play typing-based games, which together have increased my speed and finger coordination.

× I prefer typing on laptop because I find it much more faster and convenient than writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop because I find it much faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

'Laptop' needs the article 'a' (article error, but corrected under adjective/adverb issue here) and 'much more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is a comparative adjective and should not be preceded by 'more'; use 'much faster' or 'far faster'. Also place 'more convenient' parallel with 'faster' as 'much faster and more convenient'. Suggestion: Use 'a laptop' and choose either 'much faster' or 'far faster' rather than 'much more faster'.

× Moreover, I use typing on the computer for making my assignments and also sending the emails.

✓ Moreover, I type on the computer to do my assignments and to send emails.

'Use typing on the computer' is awkward; the verb 'type' is more natural. 'For making my assignments' should be 'to do my assignments' or 'to write my assignments'. 'Sending the emails'—omit 'the' unless referring to specific emails; use 'send emails'. Suggestion: Use 'type on the computer to do/write my assignments and to send emails.'

× Plus point is that I can edit the long documents and share it with friends very easily.

✓ A plus is that I can edit long documents and share them with friends very easily.

'Plus point' is unnatural; 'A plus' is better. 'The long documents' is specific—use 'long documents' generally. 'Share it' is incorrect pronoun number; 'documents' is plural so use 'share them'. Suggestion: Use correct article and match pronoun number: 'A plus is that I can edit long documents and share them with friends.'

× Yes I do. I usually prefer laptop keyboard for the typing.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually prefer a laptop keyboard for typing.

Missing comma after 'Yes' is punctuation but main issues: 'laptop keyboard' needs article 'a' and 'for the typing' is unidiomatic; use 'for typing'. Suggestion: Add 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and use 'typing' without 'the'.

× Mainly I use for studies during my works and also sharing documents to my friends.

✓ Mainly I use it for studying, for work, and for sharing documents with my friends.

Sentence is ungrammatical: 'use for studies during my works' incorrect prepositions and nouns. 'Studying' (gerund) fits instead of 'studies', 'work' (uncountable) instead of 'works', and use 'share documents with friends' not 'sharing documents to my friends'. Also include object 'it' referring to the laptop/keyboard. Suggestion: Rephrase clearly with 'use it for studying, for work, and for sharing documents with my friends.'

× I find it more convenient and comfortable rather than writing by pen or paper because it also increase my typing skills and accuracy.

✓ I find it more convenient and comfortable than writing with a pen or on paper because it also increases my typing skills and accuracy.

Use 'than' not 'rather than' after 'find it more ...' Also 'writing by pen or paper' should be 'writing with a pen or on paper'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it also increases' not 'increase'. Suggestion: Use correct comparative structure 'more ... than' and correct verb form 'increases'.

× Moreover, it also improve my typing speed so whenever I want to type a long document.

✓ Moreover, it also improves my typing speed, so I can type a long document whenever I want.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it improves' not 'it improve'. Sentence fragment 'so whenever I want to type a long document' needs main clause; reorder to 'so I can type a long document whenever I want.' Suggestion: Use correct verb form and complete the clause.

× Well, I learn typing on the keyboard back in the primary school where we had computer classes for the typing skill to practice the typing skills.

✓ Well, I learned to type on the keyboard back in primary school, where we had computer classes to practice typing skills.

Past action requires past tense 'learned' not 'learn'. Use 'learned to type' or 'learned typing'. 'Primary school' does not need 'the'. 'For the typing skill to practice the typing skills' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'to practice typing skills.' Suggestion: Use simple past 'learned' and a concise phrase 'to practice typing skills.'

× And moreover, nowadays I I type on the laptop every day because of my work, because of my study and also for sharing the documents through the friends and also editing the documents.

✓ Moreover, nowadays I type on the laptop every day because of my work and my studies, and also for sharing and editing documents with friends.

Duplicate 'I I' is a typo. 'Because of my study' should be 'my studies'. 'Sharing the documents through the friends' is incorrect preposition and article: use 'sharing documents with friends'. Also avoid repeating 'editing the documents'—combine as 'sharing and editing documents'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate word, use plural 'studies', and 'with friends' for sharing.

× Well, I improved my typing mainly by practicing regularly.

✓ Well, I improved my typing mainly by practicing regularly.

This sentence is grammatically correct as written. 'Improved' is past tense fitting the context of how the skill developed. No correction needed. Suggestion: None.

× I type a lot of studying, sharing and editing documents, which helped increase my which helped increase my speed and accuracy.

✓ I type a lot for studying, sharing, and editing documents, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.

Original has awkward 'I type a lot of studying' and repetition 'which helped increase my which helped increase'. Use 'type a lot for' + gerunds and combine relative clause: 'which has helped' (present perfect) connects past practice to present ability. Suggestion: Use 'type a lot for studying, sharing, and editing documents, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.'

× I also speed time browsing the Internet and playing the online games which made my finger coordination and typing rhythm much better.

✓ I also spend time browsing the Internet and playing online games, which has improved my finger coordination and typing rhythm.

'Speed time' is incorrect; should be 'spend time'. 'Playing the online games' should be 'playing online games' without 'the'. Use present perfect 'has improved' to show result up to now. 'Made ... much better' is acceptable but 'has improved' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'spend time' and 'playing online games' and a present perfect verb to link practice to current improvement.