Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., say “to know how to form letters” not “write the letters in perfect way”) and unnecessary repetition.

예시: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, it helps me learn how to form letters properly, which improves my penmanship. Secondly, handwriting is practical for children because it strengthens their fine motor skills through regular practice.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with clear reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words like “because” or “so” properly, and avoid filler words. Be specific about how daily typing helps you (speed, accuracy, tasks).

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because most of my work and studies are online. As a result, my typing speed and accuracy have improved, which saves me time when writing emails and assignments.

제안: Answer clearly with a time reference and one or two specific details about how you learned. Remove hesitation words and correct tense (use past tense). Use linking phrases like “during” or “when”.

예시: I taught myself to type when I started university during the COVID-19 lockdown. Because lectures and assignments moved online, I practiced a lot and quickly became comfortable with keyboarding.

제안: Provide a clear, structured method with specific actions and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “you can listen.” Mention concrete techniques (daily practice, typing exercises, lessons, online tutors, accuracy drills).

예시: I improve my typing by practising every day: I type short daily notes about what I did and use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy. I also use timed tests once a week to track my progress.

× I prefer handwriting in order to know how to write the letters in perfect way.

✓ I prefer handwriting in order to learn how to write the letters perfectly.

The sentence uses 'know' where 'learn' is more natural for acquiring a skill; 'in perfect way' is ungrammatical—use the adverb 'perfectly'. Also 'handwriting' as a noun is fine but 'learn how to' is correct collocation.

× At the same time, I think handwriting more practical and effective for children which that help them to make some exercise for their hand.

✓ At the same time, I think handwriting is more practical and effective for children because it helps them do exercises for their hands.

Missing verb 'is' needed after 'handwriting' (sentence structure/subject-verb). 'Which that' is redundant; use 'because' to give reason. 'Help them to make some exercise' is awkward; use 'helps them do exercises'. 'Hand' should be plural 'hands'.

× Uh, I type a laptop keyboard, uh, actually, yes, every day because that helped me to improve the typing in which they everything nowadays become an online and electronic.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because that helped me improve my typing as everything has become online and electronic nowadays.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'type on a keyboard'. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'actually'. 'Helped me to improve the typing' -> 'helped me improve my typing'. 'In which they everything' is ungrammatical; better: 'as everything has become online and electronic nowadays'. Present perfect 'has become' suits recent change.

× So that helped me to improve my, uh, toy being in a fast way.

✓ That helped me improve my typing quickly.

Original contains 'toy being' which is meaningless—likely intended 'typing'. Use 'typing' and adverb 'quickly' instead of 'in a fast way'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× Actually, I learn by myself, uh, during, uh, I go to my university, which, uh, during the COVID-19, everything was online, uh, and uh, that's helped me to learn that, umm, which make this thing in a fast way.

✓ Actually, I learned by myself when I went to university during COVID-19, when everything was online, and that helped me learn quickly.

Tense consistency: use past tense 'learned' and 'went' and 'helped' because the action happened in the past. Remove redundant 'which' and fillers. 'Make this thing in a fast way' is awkward; use 'learn quickly'.

× To be honest with you, I think that uh, easy way, umm, just of every day try to write, umm, write what you do during, uh, the day by the laptop or iPad in notes.

✓ To be honest, I think an easy way is to try every day to write what you do during the day on a laptop or iPad in Notes.

Sentence structure: use 'is to' plus base verb for recommendations. 'Of every day' should be 'every day'. Use preposition 'on' with devices. Capitalize app name 'Notes' if meant as app. Remove fillers.

× At the same time also you can listen.

✓ At the same time, you can also listen.

Word order: 'also' normally follows auxiliary or comes after subject; 'you can also listen' is natural. Add comma after introductory phrase.