Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意语法和表达的自然性：将不定式、动词形式和冠词用法调整正确；同时避免冗长或重复。可以用一到两句清晰表达偏好并给出具体原因。建议练习将“I prefer handwriting”作为主题句，随后用 because 引出具体原因并给出例子。

예시: I prefer handwriting. I find that writing notes by hand helps me remember information better because the physical act of writing forces me to process and summarize ideas actively.

제안: 注意流利度和准确词汇：不要使用无关的感叹词（如 Wow, TA），并保证句子结构和词汇准确（e.g. 'go everywhere' 而非 'go to everywhere'，不要用 'diving'）。建议用一句话直接回答，再用一两个短理由支持。

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient when I move between home and school.

제안: 改进时态和从句结构：使用正确的过去时和动词形式，并简化表达。例如用 'My school held a class/workshop in primary school'，并说明大概时间或年级。避免多余词汇。

예시: I learned to type in primary school. My school held a typing workshop when I was about eight, and we practiced basic typing exercises on laptops.

제안: 提高表达清晰度和词汇准确性：用正确的结构谈具体方法（e.g. practice with typing apps, regular drills, accuracy focus）。注意时态一致和名词形式（timing → timing/speed; applications → an app or apps）。

예시: I improved my typing speed in high school by using popular typing apps. I practiced daily with timed exercises and focused on accuracy before increasing my speed.

× To be honest, I prefer to handwriting because I think handwriting can makes us have a great ability to memorize something.

✓ To be honest, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can help us have a great ability to memorize things.

句中“prefer to handwriting”用法不正确。动词prefer后可接动名词（handwriting）或不带to的不定式，但常用结构是“prefer + noun/gerund”。另外“can makes”主语是can后应接动词原形，且“help”更自然；“memorize something”改为复数“things”更符合语境。建议：记住prefer后通常接动名词或名词；情态动词后用动词原形；使用help来表达“帮助我们...”。

× To be honest, I prefer to handwriting because I think handwriting can makes us have a great ability to memorize something.

✓ To be honest, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can help us have a great ability to memorize things.

句子中原本有第三人称单数动词变化错误“can makes”，情态动词can后应使用动词原形“make”或更自然的“help”。简体中文建议：情态动词后不用加-s，动词保持原形。

× Wow, I usually TA type on the laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient when you go to everywhere to diving.

✓ Wow, I usually type on the laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient when you go everywhere to do diving.

原句中“TA type”疑为多余字母，应为“type”。“go to everywhere”不正确，正确是“go everywhere”或“go to places”。此外“to diving”应使用不定式“to do diving”或更常用“go diving”。建议：去掉多余字母，使用“go everywhere”，若表达去潜水应说“go diving”或“do diving”。

× Wow, I usually TA type on the laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient when you go to everywhere to diving.

✓ Wow, I usually type on the laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient when you go everywhere to go diving.

“on the laptop keyboard”为正确用法，但“go to everywhere”中介词“to”不能与“everywhere”连用；“to diving”也不应直接接动名词，建议用“go diving”或“go to (a place) to dive”。简体中文建议：everywhere前不要加to；表达“去潜水”常用“go diving”。

× Well, it was the period in primary school and my school hold a lecture to help us to how to typing on the keyboard or on laptop.

✓ Well, it was during primary school and my school held a lecture to help us learn how to type on the keyboard or on a laptop.

句中时态应为过去时，故“hold”应改为过去式“held”。此外结构“to help us to how to typing”混乱，正确为“help us learn how to type”。简体中文建议：描述过去发生的事情用过去时；动词help后可接不带to的动词或不定式；learn how to do sth结构常用。

× Well, it was the period in primary school and my school hold a lecture to help us to how to typing on the keyboard or on laptop.

✓ Well, it was during primary school and my school held a lecture to help us learn how to type on the keyboard or on a laptop.

“the period in primary school”更自然表达为“during primary school”。“on laptop”缺冠词，应为“on a laptop”。简体中文建议：表示在某个时期用during；单数可数名词前需加冠词（a/an/the）。

× To be honest, I improve my skills on timing. It was on high school that has a popular applications to help us to improve the speed on timing.

✓ To be honest, I improve my skills in typing. It was in high school that there were popular applications to help us improve our typing speed.

原句“improve my skills on timing”用词错误，应为“improve my skills in typing”或“improve my typing skills”。“It was on high school”应为“in high school”；“has a popular applications”主谓不一致且数错误，应为“there were popular applications”；“the speed on timing”应为“typing speed”。简体中文建议：表示技能用in/for或名词短语（typing skills）；表示地点或时期用in high school；主谓在人称和数上要一致。