Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers and grammar errors (e.g., "these days", "people", "prefer handwriting"). Use simple, correct sentence structures.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and connects me to my culture. For example, I enjoy writing letters and keeping handwritten notes, which help me remember things better.

제안: Answer directly with a clear statement and a brief reason. Replace fillers with linking words like "because" or "so". Use correct vocabulary ("these days", "I always use my laptop").

예시: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for both work and study. For instance, I can take it to class or work from different locations.

제안: Give a clear time reference and one concise reason or brief detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (use "keyboard", past tense: "learned"). Use linking words like "when" or "because" to connect ideas.

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about ten years old because my school required computer lessons. Since then I have used typing for homework and later for work as well.

제안: Provide a clear method with specific details and use linking words (e.g., "by", "for example"). Avoid fillers and repeat forms. Mention concrete actions or tools (practice, typing tests, lessons) to show improvement.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day while doing work and study tasks. For example, I use online typing exercises and take short daily tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× When you talk about this question, I prefer handwriting because it reflects our tradition, culture.

✓ When talking about this question, I prefer handwriting because it reflects our tradition and culture.

The original uses an unnecessary clause 'When you talk about this question' and lacks a conjunction between 'tradition' and 'culture'. Changing to the gerund phrase 'When talking about this question' is more natural. Also add 'and' to link the two nouns. Suggestion: use concise clauses and include coordinating conjunctions when listing nouns.

× Uh, in this a days every peoples are using typing, but my opinion I prefer to handwriting.

✓ Nowadays, people use typing, but in my opinion I prefer handwriting.

Multiple issues: 'in this a days' is incorrect; use 'Nowadays' or 'these days'. 'every peoples' is wrong: 'people' is an uncountable plural noun, not 'peoples'. 'are using typing' is awkward; present simple 'use typing' is better for habitual actions. 'my opinion I prefer to handwriting' should be 'in my opinion I prefer handwriting' without 'to'. Suggestion: use 'people', choose correct tense for habits (present simple), and proper prepositional phrases like 'in my opinion'.

× When to talk about this questions, uh, in this days everywhere, uh, our, uh, digital ways are included, uh, now and that's why I'm using always the laptop for a day.

✓ Speaking about this question, these days digital methods are everywhere, so I always use a laptop every day.

'When to talk about this questions' is ungrammatical; use 'Speaking about this question' or 'Regarding this question'. 'in this days' should be 'these days'. 'everywhere, our digital ways are included' is unclear; rephrase to 'digital methods are everywhere'. 'I'm using always the laptop for a day' has adverb placement and article issues; correct is 'I always use a laptop every day' or simply 'I always use a laptop'. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, fix demonstratives ('these'), adverb placement (place 'always' before the verb), and use 'a laptop' with the indefinite article.

× Want to talk about this question. I learned to type on a keyword when I was a child.

✓ I want to talk about this question. I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a child.

'Want to talk' lacks subject; include 'I'. 'keyword' is incorrect for the device used to type; the correct word is 'keyboard'. Also use 'learned to type' is fine. Suggestion: always include the subject and check vocabulary ('keyboard' not 'keyword').

× I am using the keyword to type and learning to type because every peoples are using keyword for their work for their study and I'm also wanted to do that and I also wanted to keep people for that so that's why.

✓ I used the keyboard to type and learned to type because people use keyboards for their work and studies, and I wanted to learn too, so that's why.

This sentence mixes tenses and has vocabulary errors: 'keyword' should be 'keyboard'. 'I am using...and learning' mixes present continuous with intent; since learning happened in the past, use past tense 'used' and 'learned'. 'every peoples are using' should be 'people use' (people is plural and takes plural verb without 'every'). 'for their study' should be 'for their studies'. 'I'm also wanted' is incorrect: use 'I also wanted' or 'I also want'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense (past for past events), use correct noun forms ('people', 'keyboard'), and simplify clauses.

× Well, to talk about this question, I improve my typing, uh, doing everyday typing for my work, for my study and, uh, for my, uh, some, uh, CV also for my work.

✓ Well, to answer this question, I improve my typing by practicing every day for my work and studies, and also for my CV.

Use 'to answer this question' rather than 'to talk about'. 'I improve my typing' is acceptable but 'I improve my typing by practicing every day' is clearer and uses the gerund 'practicing' after 'by'. 'everyday typing' should be 'practicing every day' or 'daily practice'. 'for my study' should be 'for my studies'. 'some CV' is incorrect; say 'my CV' or 'my résumé'. Suggestion: use 'by + -ing' to explain methods, maintain plural 'studies', and place adverbs correctly ('every day').