Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте основную мысль кратко и грамматически правильно; избегайте лишних повторов и исправьте ошибки в времени и согласовании. Используйте связки для пояснения (for example, because) и конкретизируйте сравнение между печатью и рукописным письмом. Постарайтесь не превышать 3–4 предложений и говорить уверенно.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, typing lets me send messages or emails instantly, whereas handwriting is slow and impractical for daily communication. Therefore, in modern life I usually choose to type.

제안: Дайте чёткий ответ (desktop или phone) в первом предложении, затем кратко объясните причину с помощью связующих слов. Устраните повторения и грамматические ошибки (например, 'so much more' и согласование). Упомяните конкретные примеры использования каждого устройства.

예시: I mainly use a desktop or laptop keyboard at work because it's faster and more comfortable for writing emails and documents. However, for casual messaging I prefer my phone keyboard since it is convenient and I can type quickly by swiping.

제안: Отвечайте прямо: назовите период (например, в детстве) и приведите конкретные этапы обучения. Упорядочьте информацию логично, используйте прошедшие времена правильно и избегайте лишних вводных фраз ('because I was born in 2003' не нужно).

예시: I learned to type when I was very young, around kindergarten and early primary school. At first I practiced simple messages, and then in school I improved my typing through regular computer lessons.

제안: Дайте структурированный ответ: начальное утверждение, затем конкретные методы улучшения с примерами и связками. Исправьте ошибки с артиклями и наречиями ('every day' vs 'everyday') и избегайте тавтологии.

예시: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I set aside time each day to type emails and use typing websites to increase speed and accuracy, and I focus on reducing mistakes by practicing touch-typing exercises.

× Well, in my opinion I more kind of typing person because it's more convenient and much more faster than handwrite.

✓ Well, in my opinion I am more of a typing person because it's more convenient and much faster than handwriting.

Student used incorrect word order and forms: 'I more kind of typing person' is ungrammatical — use 'I am more of a ... person'. 'much more faster' is redundant: use 'much faster' or 'far faster'. 'handwrite' is a verb; the noun 'handwriting' or phrase 'writing by hand' is needed. Suggestion: say 'I am more of a typing person because it's more convenient and much faster than handwriting.'

× For example, if I won't type a message, it's much more faster than send someone a letter.

✓ For example, if I don't type a message, it's much faster than sending someone a letter.

Student used future negative 'won't' incorrectly for habitual/possible situation — use present simple 'don't' in conditional. 'much more faster' should be 'much faster'. After 'than' a verb must be in -ing form when comparing actions: 'sending'. Suggestion: use 'If I don't type a message, it's much faster than sending someone a letter.'

× Also I think in modern worlds typing.

✓ Also I think typing is common in the modern world.

Sentence is missing structure and uses plural 'worlds' incorrectly. Need subject and verb: 'typing is common' and singular 'the modern world'. Suggestion: 'Also I think typing is common in the modern world.'

× When I'm at work I usually use keyboards because it's the most standard way to type a message type an e-mail.

✓ When I'm at work I usually use a keyboard because it's the most standard way to type a message or an e-mail.

Plural 'keyboards' can be singular 'a keyboard' when referring to using one. 'type a message type an e-mail' is repetitive and missing a conjunction: use 'or'. Article before 'e-mail' required. Suggestion: 'When I'm at work I usually use a keyboard because it's the most standard way to type a message or an e-mail.'

× But when it comes to messaging someone typing text, so much more.

✓ But when it comes to messaging someone, typing texts is much more common.

Original lacks clear subject-verb and uses 'so much more' without reference. Need to make comparison explicit: 'typing texts is much more common'. Suggestion: 'But when it comes to messaging someone, typing texts is much more common.'

× As for me much more convenience is phone keyboard because you can slide.

✓ For me, a phone keyboard is much more convenient because you can swipe.

Word order and forms wrong: 'much more convenience is phone keyboard' should be 'a phone keyboard is much more convenient'. 'slide' is wrong verb for phone input: 'swipe' is correct for sliding finger. Suggestion: 'For me, a phone keyboard is much more convenient because you can swipe.'

× Well, because I was born in 2003, so I've learned so how to type a message, how to type for at the keyboard.

✓ Well, I was born in 2003, so I learned how to type messages on a keyboard.

Tense and word order errors: 'I've learned so how' is incorrect; for a past ability learned in childhood use simple past 'I learned'. 'how to type a message' can be plural 'messages'. 'on a keyboard' is correct preposition. Suggestion: 'I was born in 2003, so I learned how to type messages on a keyboard.'

× So at the kindergarten, even before school, after that, when I came to school, I enhanced my keyboard skills.

✓ In kindergarten, even before starting school, and later when I began school, I improved my keyboard skills.

Awkward sequencing and verb choice: use 'In kindergarten' and 'before starting school'. 'Enhanced' is formal; 'improved' is natural. 'came to school' better as 'began school'. Suggestion: 'In kindergarten, even before starting school, and later when I began school, I improved my keyboard skills.'

× Well the most obvious answer is to type more.

✓ Well, the most obvious answer is to type more.

Missing comma after introductory 'Well'. Otherwise sentence is acceptable; ensure article 'the' before 'most obvious'. Suggestion: 'Well, the most obvious answer is to type more.'

× Practice is the key.

✓ Practice is the key.

This sentence is correct. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× If you everyday type messages, if you everyday send letters so you will every day get better.

✓ If you type messages every day, and if you send letters every day, you will get better every day.

Incorrect word order: 'everyday' is an adjective meaning ordinary; use adverb 'every day'. Place adverb after verb or between auxiliary and main verb: 'you will get better every day'. Also run-on sentence needs conjunction. Suggestion: 'If you type messages every day, and if you send letters every day, you will get better every day.'

× So I think the practice should help so type more.

✓ So I think practice should help, so type more.

Redundant 'the' before 'practice' unnecessary; sentence needs comma before final clause. Better: 'So I think practice should help; type more.' Suggestion: 'So I think practice should help, so type more.'