Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with verb tenses and prepositions; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

예시: I used to prefer handwriting, but recently I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can edit and organize them quickly. Also, typing looks cleaner and I can easily back up my work.

제안: Use present simple for habitual actions and avoid ‘used to’ when describing current routines. Make one clear topic sentence and provide a specific example with linking words.

예시: I type on my personal laptop every day because it is convenient and I can access my files anywhere. For example, I store photos and important documents on the laptop so they are safer and easier to find when I need them.

제안: Clarify timing with correct tense (past simple or present perfect) and give a concise timeline. Use linking words to structure the answer and avoid repetition.

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a teenager. I practiced a lot in my free time, so over a few months my speed and accuracy improved.

제안: Use present simple for ongoing habits, be specific about methods and results, and avoid repeating phrases. Mention concrete activities and outcomes with linking words.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy. Also, my brother gave me tips on hand position, which helped me type faster and make fewer mistakes.

× In the past I prefer handwriting, but recently I'm so addicted in typing because I feel comfortable in typing rather than doing handwriting.

✓ In the past I preferred handwriting, but recently I am so addicted to typing because I feel more comfortable typing than handwriting.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and uses wrong prepositions and verb forms. 'Prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match 'In the past'. 'I'm so addicted in' should be 'I am so addicted to' (correct preposition). 'Feel comfortable in typing' is better as 'feel more comfortable typing' and 'doing handwriting' is unnatural; use 'handwriting' as a noun. Suggestion: keep consistent tense, use correct preposition 'to', and use gerund forms without unnecessary prepositions.

× In handwriting we should be very careful about the cleanliness, but not in the typing.

✓ In handwriting we should be very careful about cleanliness, but not with typing.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'cleanliness' and 'typing' is incorrect. Also preposition 'about' is awkward; use 'careful about cleanliness' or better 'careful with cleanliness'. Comparing activities uses 'with' rather than 'in'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and use 'with' for comparison.

× I used to type on my own personal laptop for a any kind of work because it will be very convenient and safe to reach at any time.

✓ I usually type on my personal laptop for any kind of work because it is very convenient and easy to access at any time.

'Used to' implies a past habitual action; the context is habitual present so use 'usually' or present simple. 'A any' is ungrammatical; use 'any'. 'Will be' is incorrect for a general statement; use 'is'. 'Safe to reach' is unnatural; use 'easy to access'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct determiners and verb tense.

× For instance, I used to keep photos and paperwork or any type of document in my laptop which will be safer for long period of time.

✓ For instance, I keep photos, paperwork, and other documents on my laptop, which is safer for long periods of time.

Again 'used to' implies past; use present simple 'keep' for habitual action. Preposition 'in my laptop' should be 'on my laptop'. 'Any type of document' better as 'other documents'. 'Will be safer' should be 'is safer' for general truth. 'For long period of time' should be plural 'for long periods of time' or 'for a long time'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, pluralize time expressions, and keep tense consistent.

× I used to learn how to use type on keyboard since long time period when I I have free time I used to type anything and keep going on practising on my laptop which provide me how to learn it.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard a long time ago; when I had free time I would type anything and keep practising on my laptop, which helped me learn.

This sentence misuses 'used to' with 'since' and mixes tenses. 'Used to learn' is incorrect; use simple past 'learned' for a completed action. 'Since long time period' is ungrammatical; use 'a long time ago'. 'When I I have' should be past 'when I had'. 'Keep going on practising' is awkward; use 'kept practising'. 'Provide me how to learn it' should be 'helped me learn' (past participle and correct verb). Suggestion: use simple past for past events, avoid 'used to' with 'since', and use clear past sequence.

× To improve my typing, I used to practice a lot in my free time and I used to get suggestions from my elders.

✓ To improve my typing, I practice a lot in my free time and I get suggestions from my elders.

'Used to' incorrectly implies past habits rather than ongoing actions. For current habitual actions, use present simple 'practice' and 'get'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines or habitual actions that continue now.

× For instance, my brother also helped me to improve my typing and to improve fast typing.

✓ For instance, my brother also helped me improve my typing and to type faster.

The sentence redundantly uses 'to improve' twice and misorders 'fast typing'. Use 'helped me improve' (verb + object + bare infinitive) and 'to type faster' for correct adverb placement. Suggestion: avoid redundant phrasing and use 'type faster' to express speed.