Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct grammar (e.g., 'typing is faster', 'documents are easy to share with colleagues'), and limit to 2–3 supporting details using linking words (firstly, secondly).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing is faster and makes it easy to share documents with colleagues. Secondly, it helps me format and organize my ideas more clearly.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with two concise, specific reasons. Correct vocabulary (data, stored) and avoid repetitive phrases. Use a linking word like 'because' and one example of convenience.

예시: I usually type on a laptop. I keep most of my data on it, so it’s convenient to carry between home and work. Also, I can use it anywhere, which suits my busy schedule.

제안: Start with a direct time reference, then add one or two specific details. Fix grammar (e.g., 'the first time I learned was in elementary school', 'we practiced touch-typing'). Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I first learned to type in elementary school. We had computer classes where we practiced touch-typing, which taught me how to type without looking at the keys and proved very useful later.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific improvement methods. Use accurate phrasing ('I improve my typing by using online typing games to increase speed and accuracy' and 'I try to do more computer-based writing rather than handwriting'). Remove fillers and correct grammar.

예시: I improve my typing by using online typing games to increase my speed and accuracy. I also try to do more work on the computer instead of handwriting to get regular practice.

× Right now I prefer typing on the computer is first because typings are more faster and those documents are easy to transport or message to my colleague, and 2nd is uh typings are easy for for formatting and also uh organizing my ideas. So for me, I like typing.

✓ Right now I prefer typing on the computer. First, typing is faster and those documents are easy to send to my colleagues. Second, typing makes formatting and organizing my ideas easier. So I like typing.

Errors: 'typings' is incorrect pluralization of 'typing' (use gerund noun 'typing'); 'more faster' is a double comparative (use 'faster'); 'message to my colleague' is wrong verb and singular colleague (use 'send to my colleagues'); word order and clarity issues. Suggestion: Use 'typing' as a general noun, avoid double comparatives, use correct verbs ('send') and plural for colleagues, break long sentence into shorter sentences for clarity.

× I type on laptops mostly because most of them are datas and most of the information are stored in my laptop and then it is easy to bring with me to homes and the working spaces, so that is more convenient and I can use this every time whenever I want. So I like the laptop.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop because most of my data and information are stored on it, and it is easy to bring with me to home and work, so it is more convenient and I can use it whenever I want. So I prefer a laptop.

Errors: 'types on laptops' preposition use and article choice; 'datas' is incorrect plural; 'stored in my laptop' should be 'stored on it'; 'bring with me to homes and the working spaces' incorrect prepositions and plurality. Suggestion: Use 'on' for storage on devices, singular 'data' or 'my data', use 'bring with me' + destination 'home' or 'to work', and replace vague 'the laptop' with 'a laptop' or 'it' for cohesion.

× OK. I think the first time I've learned this is at the elementary school because this class that teaching us how to use a computer, there's also a practice for us knowing how to type and then knowing how to type without looking at the keyboard. So I think that is the really beginning for me and really useful.

✓ OK. I think I first learned this in elementary school because there was a class that taught us how to use a computer; we also practiced typing and learned to type without looking at the keyboard. So I think that was the real beginning for me and it was very useful.

Errors: Incorrect tense and verb forms: 'I've learned this is at the elementary school' mixes present perfect with time expression and wrong preposition; 'this class that teaching us' should be past tense 'taught'; 'there's also a practice for us knowing' is awkward and wrong tense. Suggestion: Use simple past to describe past events ('learned','taught','practiced'), use 'in elementary school' (no article), and simplify clauses for clarity.

× I will improve my typing by these online games on the website and they can try to change my typing speed and accuracy for my typing and also I will trying to do uh, more's works on computers instead of handwriting those practices.

✓ I will improve my typing with online typing games on websites because they can help increase my speed and accuracy. I will also try to do more work on a computer instead of handwriting practice.

Errors: 'they can try to change' is awkward; 'I will trying' mixes future with present participle (incorrect form); 'more's works' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'will' + base verb or 'try to' + base verb (e.g., 'I will also try to do more work'), use 'help increase' rather than 'try to change', and use plural 'work' or 'practice' correctly.