Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は主題に触れていますが、表現が不自然で優柔不断に聞こえます。フィラー（uh）を減らし、理由を明確かつ具体的に述べる必要があります。また“typing is the one the best way to remember”は意味があいまいで矛盾しているため、正しい比較表現を使って簡潔に示してください。文は1〜3文にまとめ、リンク表現（because, so, thereforeなど）を適切に使いましょう。

예시: I prefer handwriting because writing notes by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I study, I find that forming letters and summarizing ideas on paper makes it easier to recall facts later.

제안: 答えが短く不明瞭で文法ミスや発音の誤り（top→type）があります。また“Because there's nothing”は文の意味が伝わりません。まずは簡潔に主張（topic sentence）を述べ、その理由を1文で具体的に説明してください。不要な繰り返しを避け、完全な文にしましょう。

예시: I type on a desktop every day because I prefer a larger screen and a full-size keyboard, which are more comfortable for long typing sessions.

제안: 答えが散漫で過度のフィラーが含まれています。文法も不正確（過去形を使うべき）で意味が伝わりにくいです。学んだ時期を明確に示し、その学習方法を具体的に説明してください。リンク語（I learned when..., because..., so...）を使うと一貫性が出ます。

예시: I learned to type when I was a teenager. I didn't take formal lessons; instead, I taught myself using online typing tutorials and practice exercises, which helped me improve gradually.

제안: 回答は要点を伝えていますが、時制の混同（use/used）や不要なフィラーが多く、具体性に欠けます。サイトの名前や使い方をもう少し詳しく説明し、どのように効果があるか（例：速度や正確さが向上した）を述べると良いです。文は現在形で統一しましょう。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on a website called Sushi Typing. It gives me short exercises where I have to type words quickly, and over time my speed and accuracy have improved.

× I prefer handwriting because uh, I think, uh, typing is the one the best way to remember.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think typing is the best way to remember.

'the one the best' is incorrect word order and redundant. Use the superlative 'the best' alone. Remove filler 'uh' and extra 'the one' to make the sentence natural. Also keep parallel structure: 'I prefer handwriting because I think typing is the best way to remember.' Suggestion: eliminate unnecessary words and use correct superlative placement.

× I. I top on the desktop. Because the there's nothing.

✓ I type on the desktop because there is nothing else.

Multiple issues: 'I. I' and 'top' are incorrect forms; 'top' should be 'type'. Starting a sentence with 'Because' creates a fragment; combine clauses. 'there's nothing' is vague; add 'else' for clarity. Correct sentence: 'I type on the desktop because there is nothing else.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use complete sentences.

× Uh, when I was, uh, I, I don't learn from typing, Uh, I don't run typing from anyone else. I just run by myself. So on the Internet.

✓ When I was young, I didn't learn typing from anyone else. I taught myself using the Internet.

Tense and word choice errors: use past tense 'didn't learn' for past time 'when I was'. 'run typing' is incorrect; use 'teach myself' or 'taught myself'. 'I just run by myself' should be past 'I taught myself'. Clarify time expression ('when I was young') if intended. Use 'using the Internet' to show the method. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions and choose correct verbs (learn/teach self).

× Uh, I use. I used the site to improve my typing. Uh, it's called, uh, sushi typing. You have to type the word.

✓ I used a site to improve my typing. It's called Sushi Typing. You have to type the words.

Inconsistent tense: 'I use. I used' — choose past 'I used' because describing how you improved. 'the site' is fine but 'a site' is more natural here. 'sushi typing' is a proper noun so capitalize. 'type the word' should be plural 'words' if referring to multiple practice items. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, capitalize names, and use plural when appropriate.