Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意図が分かるが、言い直しや不要な語句が多く流暢さに欠けます。まずは簡潔なトピック文を作り、その後に1–2の具体的理由を論理的につなげて述べましょう。例えば「because」を使って理由を示し、接続詞（and、soの代わりに therefore や, because of this など）を使って繋げると自然です。また “erase things like what” のような曖昧表現を避け、具体例（spelling mistakes, drafts）を挙げてください。発音やため息・詰まり（um, uh）は減らす練習を。最大文数は5文以内に収めてください。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing easier. For example, I can quickly correct spelling mistakes and reorganize paragraphs on a computer, which saves time when I’m writing reports. Therefore, typing helps me work more efficiently.

제안: 構成は良いが表現が繰り返しになっています。まず簡潔な主文を述べ、その後に具体例を列挙して一文で繋げる練習をしてください。複数の動詞に対して適切な形（send emails, write reports）と冠詞（a report / reports）を確認し、接続詞（for example, such as）を使って流れを改善しましょう。語彙を少し増やして“for work”や“on a daily basis”などの表現を使うと自然です。

예시: Yes, I use a keyboard every day for my job. For example, I regularly send emails to clients and write reports for my supervisors, so typing is an essential part of my daily routine.

제안: 伝わる内容ですが、文法（learn how to type on a keyboard）、時制、一貫性を改善しましょう。接続詞（before/after）や過去形の統一を心掛け、具体的な時期や練習方法（typing courses, online practice）を一文で補足すると説得力が増します。冗長な繰り返しを避け、文を短く整理してください。

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at college. Before that I didn’t have a laptop, so I had few chances to practice, but once I started university I used a computer for assignments and practiced a lot, which improved my speed.

제안: 現在形と過去形の混同、語彙の不適切使用（'gay' は不適切）やため息・詰まりが評価を下げます。まず現在の習慣を答えるなら現在形（I improve / I practise）を使い、使った方法を具体的に述べてください（typing apps, online games, timed tests）。否定的・曖昧な表現は避け、ポジティブで明確な語を選びましょう。また発言中の詰まりや不適切語を取り除く練習をしてください。

예시: I improve my typing by using a typing app and online games that track my accuracy and speed. I practise for about 20 minutes a day and use timed exercises to push my speed, which has noticeably increased my words-per-minute.

× I prefer typing because it's easier to erase things like what, And I'm glad typing so it's easier and faster than writing.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier to erase things, and I'm glad to be able to type because it's easier and faster than writing.

The original sentence uses an incorrect conjunction and awkward phrasing ('like what, And I'm glad typing'). Use a single coordinating conjunction 'and' (lowercase) to join clauses. Also change 'I'm glad typing' to 'I'm glad to be able to type' for grammatical correctness and clarity, and add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: Combine ideas smoothly: 'I prefer typing because it's easier to erase things, and I'm glad to be able to type because it's easier and faster than writing.'

× Yes, I use keyboard to type every day for my job.

✓ Yes, I use a keyboard to type every day for my job.

The noun 'keyboard' requires an article in this context. Use the indefinite article 'a' because you refer to one nonspecific keyboard. Suggestion: Use 'a keyboard' when mentioning a singular, countable noun for the first time.

× For example when I send emails to my clients or I write report to my supervisors.

✓ For example, when I send emails to my clients or write reports to my supervisors.

The sentence has parallelism and article errors. 'When I send emails to my clients or I write report' is awkward. Remove the repeated subject 'I' for parallel structure and change 'report' to the plural 'reports' with no article to match 'emails'. Also add a comma after 'For example'. Suggestion: Keep parallel verbs in similar forms: 'send emails' and 'write reports'.

× So I use keyboard every day.

✓ So I use a keyboard every day.

Missing article before the singular countable noun 'keyboard'. Also this is a short sentence; adding 'a' fixes the grammatical error. Suggestion: Use 'a keyboard' for singular, countable items.

× I learned how to type keyboard when I was in college.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in college.

The verb phrase needs the preposition 'on' before 'a keyboard'. Without it the sentence is ungrammatical. Also add the article 'a' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: Use 'learned how to type on a keyboard'.

× Before I entered college, I didn't have my laptop, so I had no opportunity to practice that.

✓ Before I entered college, I didn't have a laptop, so I had no opportunity to practice.

Use the indefinite article 'a' for 'laptop' because it's not a specific possession previously mentioned. Also 'practice that' is awkward; 'practice' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: Say 'I didn't have a laptop' and avoid unnecessary pronouns like 'that'.

× But after entering college, there are a lot of opportunity to write by typing, so I practiced a lot.

✓ But after entering college, there were a lot of opportunities to write by typing, so I practiced a lot.

Subject-verb agreement and countability errors: 'a lot of opportunity' is incorrect because 'opportunity' is countable and needs plural 'opportunities'. Also the context is past tense, so use 'were' instead of 'are'. Suggestion: Use plural 'opportunities' and match tense: 'there were a lot of opportunities'.

× I improved my typing skills by using app.

✓ I improved my typing skills by using an app.

Missing article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'app'. The past tense 'improved' is appropriate given the context. Suggestion: Say 'by using an app'.

× It was kind of gay so I umm, tracked this by enjoying the game when I was college.

✓ It was kind of fun, so I tracked my progress by enjoying the game when I was in college.

The original uses an inappropriate adjective 'gay' in a nonstandard way; use 'fun' or 'entertaining'. Also add article and preposition: 'when I was in college'. Change 'tracked this' to 'tracked my progress' for clarity and collocation. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Use neutral, appropriate adjectives and clear wording: 'It was kind of fun, so I tracked my progress by playing the game when I was in college.'