Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音や語彙の誤りを直し、文構造を明確にしましょう。直接的なトピック文で始め、理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べます。接続詞（because, so, howeverなど）を使って論理的に繋げ、不要な繰り返しを避けて最大5文に収めてください。

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me think more clearly. For example, I can draw quick notes and arrows which makes planning easier. Also, handwriting feels faster for short tasks, so I usually write by hand when I study.

제안: 質問に直接答えた後、日常の状況を具体的に説明しましょう。否定だけで終わらせず、代わりに使っている方法や理由を付け加えます。また短くて明確な文を使い、接続詞で説明をつなげます。

예시: No, I don't use a computer every day. Instead, I usually use my smartphone for messages and notes, so I rarely need a keyboard. Because of that, I'm not very familiar with desktop or laptop keyboards.

제안: 時制と語順を正しく使い、学んだ時期を明確に述べてから難しさの理由を具体例で説明してください。短く分かりやすい文で、接続詞（when, because, so）を使うと良いです。

예시: I learned basic typing when I was in elementary school, but I still find it difficult. Because I practised only a little back then, my speed is slow and I make many mistakes.

제안: 改善方法を具体的かつ順序立てて説明してください。現在行っている練習や今後の計画を述べ、接続詞で点をつなぎます。文法や語彙を正して、文を簡潔にまとめてください。

예시: I practice typing every day on a computer for about 20 minutes, and I use online typing games to improve accuracy. Also, I plan to take a short typing course to learn proper finger placement, so my speed should get better over time.

× I prefer handliding because hand lighting is easier than typing for me.

✓ I prefer handwriting because handwriting is easier for me than typing.

The student used incorrect words and misspellings ('handliding', 'hand lighting'). Replace with 'handwriting'. Also adjust word order for natural English: 'handwriting is easier for me than typing.' Suggestions: learn correct vocabulary and check spelling; practice common collocations like 'prefer handwriting' and comparative structure 'X is easier for me than Y.'

× I don't use computer so I don't know it.

✓ I don't use a computer, so I don't know how to use one.

Missing article 'a' before 'computer' (article error) and vague pronoun 'it'. Also sentence structure improvement: use 'how to use one' to refer to computers generally. Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns and use clear references ('one' or 'it' with a clear antecedent).

× I was elementary school student. It is difficult for me to use typing.

✓ I was an elementary school student. Typing was difficult for me.

Missing article 'an' before 'elementary school student' and awkward tense/structure in second sentence. The question asked 'When did you learn' so past tense fits: 'Typing was difficult for me.' Suggestion: use appropriate articles and match tense to context; use 'was' for past states and place the noun phrase correctly.

× I use computer and typing so first first time is difficult but I good.

✓ I used a computer and practiced typing, so the first time was difficult, but I improved.

Several issues: missing article 'a' (article error), incorrect verb tense and form ('use' should be past 'used' if referring to past), repetition 'first first time', missing verb in 'I good' (sentence without a verb / adjective use). Also better to say 'practiced typing' and 'I improved.' Suggestion: ensure verbs are present and correctly conjugated, remove repetitions, and include a verb to complete the clause; match tense to context (past events).