Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid repetitions and filler words. Use correct comparative forms ("faster than handwriting"), and add a brief supporting detail (e.g., speed, editing ease).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing easier. For example, when I study or write essays I can quickly delete or move sentences, which saves time and helps me organize my ideas better.

제안: Start with a direct sentence and give one specific detail about usage. Remove hesitations and correct phrasing (e.g., "I mostly use a laptop"). Use a linking phrase to add a reason or example.

예시: I mostly type on a laptop every day, especially when I study or write essays. For instance, I take notes and draft assignments on my laptop because it is portable and convenient.

제안: Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about how you learned, avoiding vague phrases. Use linking words (e.g., "and", "after that") to make the sequence clear and correct small grammar errors ("practiced at home").

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school; my teacher taught the basics and showed proper finger placement. After that I practiced at home on a laptop to improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Provide a clear method and a specific example of practice. Avoid repetition and filler words. Mention frequency or tools (e.g., online typing exercises, regular practice) to make the answer more informative and natural.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day, usually with online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I spend twenty minutes each evening on a typing program to increase my speed and reduce errors.

× Yes, I prefer typing as compared to handwriting because typing is more faster than me.

✓ Yes, I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster than handwriting.

This sentence uses the comparative adverb phrase 'more faster' which is incorrect; 'faster' is already a comparative form and should not be combined with 'more'. Also 'than me' is unnatural here; compare the two activities (typing and handwriting) so use 'than handwriting' or repeat 'handwriting'. Suggestion: use the single-word comparative 'faster' and compare the two nouns directly.

× Uh, uh, typing is more faster.

✓ Typing is faster.

Repeating 'more faster' is ungrammatical because 'faster' is the comparative form of 'fast' and does not take 'more'. Also filler words like 'uh' should be removed in a corrected written response. Suggestion: use 'faster' alone for clear comparison.

× Umm, When I'm doing my studies, I usually type, type and umm, and I usually correct my errors.

✓ When I study, I usually type and then correct my errors.

The original sentence has redundant repetition ('type, type' and 'umm') and awkward tense/aspect mixing ('When I'm doing my studies' is present continuous while the rest is habitual). Use the simple present 'When I study' for habitual actions and remove repetitions. Suggestion: simplify to a single clear clause describing habitual behaviour.

× Yes, I type on the laptop, uh, every day, uh, while I'm doing study uh, when I write the essay and I usually most on the type on the laptop.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day when I study or write essays; I usually use the laptop for typing.

Problems include incorrect pronoun/possessive ('the laptop' should be 'my laptop' if referring to personal device), awkward phrasing ('while I'm doing study' should be 'when I study'), and word order issues ('I usually most on the type' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: use 'my laptop', simple present for habitual actions, and clear verb phrases like 'use the laptop for typing'.

× When I was a child, I learned uh typing in my primary school and my teacher also showed me how to type.

✓ When I was a child, I learned typing in primary school, and my teacher showed me how to type.

Main issues are filler 'uh' and article use 'my primary school' which is acceptable but 'primary school' is more natural. The verbs 'learned' and 'showed' are correctly in the past tense to match 'When I was a child'. Suggestion: remove fillers and streamline the phrase to maintain past-tense narrative.

× And that day I also revised my typing in as home as well using laptop.

✓ That day I also practiced my typing at home using a laptop.

Original has incorrect preposition use ('in as home as well') and missing article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'Revised my typing' is awkward; 'practiced my typing' is natural. Suggestion: use 'at home' for location and include 'a' before singular countable nouns like 'laptop'.

× I improve my tapping I'm I'm using daily laptop and I improve my typing through the laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by using my laptop every day.

Problems: 'tapping' should be 'typing', repetition and filler 'I'm I'm', and awkward phrasing 'I improve my typing through the laptop'. Use the gerund after preposition 'by' to indicate the method: 'by using my laptop'. Also use 'every day' for frequency. Suggestion: correct the verb spelling and simplify to a clear method statement.