Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but watch grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid minor redundancy. Make the flow smoother by using linking words and vary vocabulary (e.g., 'revise' or 'organize' instead of 'recognize'). Keep to at most 4–5 sentences and correct small errors like 'make' → 'makes'.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can easily edit and organize my notes, which saves time. Moreover, typing is better for long documents because it makes formatting and sharing online much simpler.

제안: Answer is understandable but contains repetition and some awkward phrasing. Remove redundant phrases ('so that's why') and fix small errors ('everyday' should be 'every day'; delete 'a' before 'whenever'). Use a concise topic sentence and one supporting detail.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop. When I need to take notes for classes or assignments, I find the laptop more convenient than using a phone or notebook.

제안: Tense use and phrasing need correction. Use past simple for when you started (e.g., 'I learned...') or present perfect for ongoing actions ('I've been typing since...'). Avoid vague phrases like 'fourth class' — say 'fourth grade' if appropriate. Keep to one clear sentence about when you started and one about practice.

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in fourth grade. Since then, I've practiced typing every day to become faster and more accurate.

제안: Good idea but avoid clichés and awkward grammar. Replace 'practice makes a man perfect' with a simple statement about practice. Fix 'practice of typing' → 'practice typing', 'everyday' → 'every day', and streamline the answer into 2–3 sentences with a linking word ('also' or 'therefore'). Provide a specific method you use (timed exercises, typing software).

예시: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day using online typing exercises. I also check and edit my notes on the laptop, which helps me spot mistakes and gradually increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. I can edit and recognize my notes quickly. Also, typing is more comfortable for long documents and make it easier to share work online.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. I can edit and recognize my notes quickly. Also, typing is more comfortable for long documents and makes it easier to share work online.

Subject-verb agreement with a compound subject 'typing' requires the singular verb 'makes'. The original used 'make', which is incorrect. Suggestion: match the verb to the singular subject (typing -> makes).

× I have my own laptop so that's why I type on laptop keyboard everyday when I have a whenever I have to make my notes.

✓ I have my own laptop, so I type on my laptop keyboard every day whenever I need to take notes.

Multiple issues: missing articles and pronouns, adverb form, redundancy, and verb choice. 'on laptop keyboard' needs the article and possessive 'my laptop keyboard'. 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'when I have a whenever I have to make my notes' is redundant and awkward; use 'whenever I need to take notes'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement (I type).

× I have been learning on keyboard since I was in fourth class and from the day one I type every day on the keyboard to make my typing more convenient.

✓ I have been learning to type on the keyboard since I was in fourth grade, and from day one I have typed every day to improve my typing.

Problems include incorrect verb patterns and tense consistency. Use 'learning to type' instead of 'learning on keyboard'. 'Since' with a starting point requires present perfect continuous or perfect: 'have been learning' is acceptable, but 'from day one I type every day' mixes tenses; better 'I have typed every day' or 'I have practiced every day'. 'Fourth class' is nonstandard in some varieties; 'fourth grade' is clearer. Also 'to make my typing more convenient' is unnatural; use 'to improve my typing.'

× We all know that practice makes a man perfect so I practice of typing everyday so that why I can improve my typing and it is the best way to check our notes and if we make a wrong sentence we can edit it also.

✓ We all know that practice makes perfect, so I practice typing every day. That is why I can improve my typing, and it is the best way to check my notes; if I make a wrong sentence, I can edit it.

Multiple errors: idiom is 'practice makes perfect' not 'a man perfect'. Remove unnecessary preposition 'of' after 'practice'. Use 'every day' (adverb) not 'everyday' (adjective). Maintain consistent pronouns: 'my notes' and 'I' rather than switching to 'our' and 'we'. Use clearer clause connections: separate into sentences or use appropriate punctuation. Replace 'we make a wrong sentence' with 'I make a wrong sentence'.