Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct clear answer (preference) with a brief reason. Use correct grammar and natural phrasing, avoid vague expressions like "all time" and unclear phrases such as "make my heart ache." Keep it to 1–2 sentences. For example, say you prefer typing because it is faster and neater.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and my writing looks neater. Also, typing is less tiring for my hand when I have to write a lot.

제안: Answer directly which device you use daily (desktop or laptop) and give a short reason. Avoid unrelated words ("discord") and use correct prepositions (“on a laptop”). Keep it 1–2 sentences and add a linking word if you expand.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because it’s portable and easier to use than a desktop. For example, I can work anywhere in the house without moving a heavy computer.

제안: Give a clear time frame (age or period) and a concise explanation of how you learned. Use correct tense and vocabulary; avoid unclear phrases like "I was great" or "D2." One or two sentences are enough.

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten years old after my parents bought me a phone and I started practicing on it. From then on I used online typing games to improve my speed.

제안: State specific methods you use to improve typing (practice apps, lessons, touch-typing exercises) and give a brief reason or result. Use clear grammar and linking words if you add details. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing apps and doing timed exercises on my laptop and phone because they track my speed and accuracy. Also, I practice touch-typing for 15 minutes each day to reduce mistakes.

× I prepared typing because handwriting it's all time and make my heart ache.

✓ I prefer typing because handwriting takes a long time and makes my heart ache.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and contractions ('handwriting it's all time') and mixed verbs. 'Prepared typing' is incorrect for preference; use 'prefer typing'. 'It's all time' should be 'takes a long time' (verb and time expression). Also subject-verb agreement: 'handwriting ... makes my heart ache' uses singular verb 'makes'. Suggest replacing awkward phrasing and use clear subject-verb structure.

× I like typing in the laptop more than the discord because the laptop is so easy to handle.

✓ I like typing on my laptop more than on Discord because the laptop is easier to handle.

Use the correct preposition 'on' with devices and platforms ('typing on my laptop', 'on Discord'). Use possessive 'my laptop'. Use comparative 'easier' (adjective) and remove redundant article 'the' before 'laptop' when speaking generally. Capitalize proper noun 'Discord' (kept lowercase here per JSON string requirement).

× Since I was great then because I got a phone from my D2 before.

✓ I learned to type when I was young because I got a phone from my D2.

The original sentence has incorrect tense and unclear phrasing: 'Since I was great then' is ungrammatical. Use past tense 'learned' to indicate when you acquired the skill. 'Before' and 'since' are redundant; remove 'before'. Make the time expression clear: 'when I was young'.

× I improve my typing of using my laptop and my cell phone because it's so easy here to handle it.

✓ I improve my typing by using my laptop and my cell phone because they are easy to use.

Use the correct preposition 'by' to express the method ('improve... by using'). Avoid redundant pronouns: replace 'it's so easy here to handle it' with 'they are easy to use' referring to laptop and cell phone. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('they are').