Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp và sửa ngữ pháp; bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách dùng liên từ. Ví dụ: nêu lý do chính (tiết kiệm thời gian), mô tả hoàn cảnh (là sinh viên bận rộn) và một kết quả ngắn gọn. Chú ý dùng thì và mạo từ đúng (a laptop, my laptop) và tránh từ thừa như "almost use".

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use my laptop every day as a busy university student. For example, typing lets me edit documents quickly and send emails to classmates, which saves me a lot of time.

제안: Cải thiện: Trình bày mạch lạc hơn, sửa lỗi ngắt câu và ngữ pháp ("type on a laptop"; "email my professors about assignments"). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về mục đích sử dụng. Tránh ngắt quãng và sửa phát âm lẫn từ nối không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I usually type on a laptop. I often use it to email my professors about assignments and to write reports for my business classes.

제안: Cải thiện: Làm rõ thời điểm và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự thời gian. Sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi từ (ví dụ: "High Surrey" không rõ—nên nói "high school"). Loại bỏ thông tin thừa và dùng liên từ phù hợp (e.g. "because", "so"). Chú ý ngữ pháp của thì quá khứ và mạo từ.

예시: I learned to type when I was in high school. We didn't have a computer at home, so I used to go to a nearby internet cafe and pay a small fee to practice typing for the first time.

제안: Cải thiện: Trình bày gọn và chính xác: nêu phương pháp chính (luyện tập), cụ thể hơn bằng cách mô tả cách luyện (ví dụ: bài tập đánh máy, sử dụng phần mềm, đặt mục tiêu tốc độ). Sửa lỗi từ vựng ("practice" not "part protesting") và cấu trúc câu để tránh lặp.

예시: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing programs for 20 minutes a day and set weekly speed goals, which helped me type more accurately and faster.

× I prefer typing because I have a laptop and I'm a busy student, so I almost use my laptop every day.

✓ I prefer typing because I have a laptop and I'm a busy student, so I use my laptop almost every day.

Word order: place adverb 'almost' before the verb phrase 'every day' is incorrect; 'almost every day' is the correct adverbial phrase. Move 'almost' to modify the frequency expression. Suggestion: say 'use my laptop almost every day'.','grammar_problem_type_id':27},{

× Typing is very convenient and I can save my time and effort.

✓ Typing is very convenient and I can save time and effort.

Incorrect use of article with uncountable noun: 'time' and 'effort' as general concepts do not need 'my'. Removing 'my' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'save time and effort'.','grammar_problem_type_id':8},{

× Yes, I do. As I mentioned earlier, I'm a business student in India, so I usually use my laptop. I mean I type on. Laptop to e-mail my professors into my assignments or send emails to.

✓ Yes, I do. As I mentioned earlier, I'm a business student in India, so I usually use my laptop. I mean I type on my laptop to email my professors about my assignments or send emails to them.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments and incorrect preposition and pronoun use. 'I type on. Laptop' is fragmented and 'into my assignments' is incorrect preposition; use 'about my assignments' or 'to submit my assignments'. Also 'email' as verb should be one word; refer to recipients with 'them' or 'my professors'. Suggestion: combine into one clear sentence: 'I type on my laptop to email my professors about my assignments or to send them emails.'','grammar_problem_type_id':27},{

× When I was in High Surrey in secondary school, at that time I didn't have a computer.

✓ When I was in high school at High Surrey, I didn't have a computer then.

Tense and redundancy: 'When I was... at that time' repeats time reference. Also word order of place name is unclear. Use past simple consistently: 'I didn't have a computer then.' Suggestion: 'When I was in high school at High Surrey, I didn't have a computer.'','grammar_problem_type_id':5},{

× However, my post office near my home, they have some and I visit there and pay for a small fee to use it, and I practice typing on the keyboard at that time for the very first.

✓ However, the internet cafe near my home had some, so I visited there and paid a small fee to use one, and I practiced typing on the keyboard there for the first time.

Incorrect use of prepositions and articles and awkward phrasing: 'my post office' likely wrong word; use 'internet cafe' or 'computer center'. Use past tense 'had' to match 'visited'; 'visited there' better than 'I visit there'; 'use one' refers to a computer; 'for the very first' should be 'for the first time'. Suggestion: clarify noun, use past tense consistently, and correct phrases: 'visited', 'paid a small fee', 'practiced... for the first time.'','grammar_problem_type_id':11},{

× Through part protesting, I mean practice is the best way to improve my typing skill.

✓ Through practice; I mean practice is the best way to improve my typing skills.

Sentence structure and word choice errors: 'part protesting' makes no sense — likely meant 'practice'. Also 'typing skill' is better as plural 'typing skills'. Suggestion: replace with 'Through practice. Practice is the best way to improve my typing skills.'','grammar_problem_type_id':26},{

× I remember when I was in high school or the first year student on my typing skill was not good.

✓ I remember when I was in high school in my first year my typing skill was not good.

Tense and sentence structure: 'or the first year student on my typing skill' is ungrammatical. Use past simple 'was not good' and restructure: 'when I was in high school in my first year, my typing skill was not good.' Suggestion: 'I remember when I was in my first year of high school, my typing skill was not good.'','grammar_problem_type_id':5},{

× However, now everything is better and I can do faster.

✓ However, now everything is better and I can type faster.

Incorrect use of verb and adverb: 'do faster' is vague. Use specific verb 'type' with adverb 'faster'. Suggestion: 'I can type faster.'','grammar_problem_type_id':6},{

× Yes. So practice is very important.

✓ Yes. So, practice is very important.

Sentence structure and punctuation: adding a comma improves readability. Content is fine. Suggestion: 'So, practice is very important.'','grammar_problem_type_id':26}]}