Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ปรับความชัดเจนของคำตอบและใช้ประโยคหัวข้อที่ตรงประเด็น อธิบายเหตุผลเฉพาะเจาะจง และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดหรือใช้ผิด เช่น ‘diving’ ควรเป็น ‘typing’ ฝึกใช้ linking words สั้นๆ เช่น because / but เพื่อให้ประโยคกระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติ

예시: I prefer typing because it helps me finish my homework faster and keeps my notes organized. However, I sometimes use handwriting for quick reminders because it’s faster for short notes.

제안: แก้ไวยากรณ์คำพื้นฐาน (everyday/every day; ties→type) และจัดลำดับข้อมูลให้ชัด ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียด ใช้ linking words เช่น because / and / so เพื่อความเชื่อมโยงของเหตุผล

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I type assignments for work and study. I also check my emails every morning and communicate with my classmates online, so the laptop is convenient.

제안: ปรับเวลาและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง (เมื่ออายุเท่าไหร่ → 'when I was about 10 years old') อธิบายสถานที่หรือบริบทอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจง ฝึกหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ เช่น 'I think' มากเกินไป และแก้คำศัพท์ที่ผิด

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten years old in a basic computer class at school. I enjoyed the lessons because typing felt useful for my studies and later for assignments.

제안: ปรับการใช้คำและไวยากรณ์ (timing→typing/speed; practice practicing→practice) ระบุวิธีการที่ชัดเจนและเป็นรูปธรรม เช่น ฝึกแบบมีเวลา (timed tests), ใช้เว็บไซต์ฝึกพิมพ์ และฝึกวันละกี่นาที ใช้ linking words เช่น by / through เพื่อเชื่อมวิธีการกับผล

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on my computer every day for about 20 minutes. I use online typing tests and exercises to measure my speed and accuracy, and I focus on typing without looking at the keyboard.

× I prefer diving because it is better for uh to my homework and my study.

✓ I prefer typing because it is better for my homework and my studies.

The student used 'diving' (present participle) instead of 'typing' which fits the context; this is a word choice error and misuse of -ing form. Also 'to my homework' is incorrect preposition use and 'my study' should be plural 'my studies' to refer to general school work. Suggestion: use the noun 'typing' and correct preposition to 'for' and pluralize 'studies' when speaking generally.

× I also use handwriting for a quick note.

✓ I also use handwriting for quick notes.

The phrase 'a quick note' is not wrong in all contexts, but here the student speaks generally, so plural 'quick notes' is more natural. Use plural when referring to habitual actions.

× I use a laptop keyboard everydays because uh, I ties assignment for my work and my study and I also check e-mail in every morning and use it through communication with my classmates.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because I type assignments for my work and my studies, and I also check email every morning and use it to communicate with my classmates.

Multiple errors: 'everydays' should be 'every day' (adverb phrase); 'ties' is incorrect verb form 'type' (spelling/verb form); 'my study' should be 'my studies' (quantifier/plural); 'in every morning' should be 'every morning' (preposition unnecessary); 'use it through communication' is awkward — use 'use it to communicate'. Suggestions: correct adverb phrase placement, verb form, pluralization, and choose natural prepositions and verb patterns.

× OK, when I want about 10 years old I learn how to type on keyboard in basic computer 'cause as my P primary CQ.

✓ OK, when I was about 10 years old I learned how to type on a keyboard in basic computer class because of my primary school.

Tense and auxiliary errors: 'when I want' should be 'when I was' (past state), 'I learn' should be past 'I learned'. Missing articles: 'on keyboard' should be 'on a keyboard'. 'basic computer' needs 'class'. The phrase 'cause as my P primary CQ' is unclear; likely meant 'because of my primary school'. Suggestion: use past tense for past events and include appropriate articles and nouns.

× And I think I enjoy to learn it because I think it's useful for study and and calia.

✓ And I think I enjoyed learning it because I think it's useful for studying and daily life.

'Enjoy to learn' is incorrect: 'enjoy' is followed by gerund 'learning'. 'Useful for study' should be 'useful for studying' or 'useful for my studies'. 'and calia' is unclear; likely 'and daily life' or 'and career'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'enjoy' and choose appropriate noun phrase for usefulness.

× OK, I improve my timing by practice practicing on my computer is every day and use online having taste and exercise to increase my speed about timing.

✓ OK, I improved my typing by practicing on my computer every day and using online tests and exercises to increase my typing speed.

Many issues: 'improve my timing' should be 'improved my typing' or 'improve my typing speed'; 'practice practicing' is redundant — use 'practicing'; 'is every day' wrong placement — say 'every day'; 'use online having taste and exercise' unclear — likely 'using online tests and exercises'; 'speed about timing' should be 'typing speed'. Also tense should match context (past or present continuous); here past/present simple works. Suggestion: use gerunds for activities, correct word choice ('typing' not 'timing'), and place adverbs ('every day') correctly.