Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and clarify unclear phrases. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Replace vague expressions like “there is a strange” with clear explanations (e.g., “it stimulates my thinking”). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I have been used to writing with a pen since childhood. In addition, writing on paper helps me brainstorm more effectively because the physical act of writing stimulates my thinking and lets me draw quick diagrams.

제안: Make one clear topic sentence saying which you use more and why. Avoid run-on sentences and redundant words. Use linking words like “because” and “however” correctly, and give specific examples of tasks. Finish the sentence—don’t leave it incomplete.

예시: I mostly type on a desktop during office hours because it has preinstalled software for tasks like poster analysis and storing project data. However, I prefer using my laptop at home on Sundays because it lets me work comfortably from the sofa or another room.

제안: Open with a clear timeframe, then describe steps you took to learn with linking words. Correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like “realized that”. Mention specific methods and a clear sequence (gift → self-practice → app → help from son). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I learned to type during my university years after my father gave me a personal computer. At first I practiced on my own, then I used an online typing tutor to improve my speed and accuracy, and finally my son showed me useful shortcuts and corrected my hand position.

제안: Give a structured answer: say current methods, then explain how each method helps. Avoid run-on phrases and unfinished sentences. Use linking words like “first”, “then”, and “finally”. Be specific about what the classes taught (finger placement, timed exercises) and the shortcuts your son taught.

예시: First, I practised by copying texts to build familiarity with the keyboard. Then I joined online typing classes that taught proper finger placement and timed exercises to boost speed and accuracy. Finally, my son taught me useful keyboard shortcuts that save time when I edit documents.

× I prefer handwriting over typing because I'm trained to write with the pen on paper since my childhood.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I have been trained to write with a pen on paper since my childhood.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' (acceptable but 'to' is more natural here). The progressive 'I'm trained' is incorrect for an action that started in the past and continues; use present perfect passive 'have been trained'. Use 'a pen' (article) and 'since my childhood' requires a present perfect to show continuation.

× Moreover, writing on paper also helped me to do some brainstorming.

✓ Moreover, writing on paper also helps me do brainstorming.

Context is general habit, so present simple 'helps' is correct rather than past 'helped'. Also omit 'to' after 'helps me' when followed by a verb: use 'helps me do'.

× Moreover, I can generate more ideas while I hold pen in my fingers because I think there is a strange.

✓ Moreover, I can generate more ideas while I hold a pen because I think there is something strange.

Add article 'a' before 'pen' and remove 'in my fingers' which is redundant with 'hold a pen'. The clause 'because I think there is a strange' is incomplete; replace with 'there is something strange' or better yet explain what is strange. Ensure sentence completes the idea.

× During my office hours I mostly type on desktop so because it has already preloaded software where I can do poster analysis, facial muscle analyzers as well as keep my data stored in this.

✓ During office hours I mostly type on a desktop because it already has preloaded software where I can do poster analysis and facial muscle analysis, and I can keep my data stored on it.

Use article 'a desktop'. Remove redundant 'so'. 'Has already preloaded' is awkward; 'already has preloaded software' or simply 'it already has preloaded software'. 'Facial muscle analyzers' should be 'facial muscle analysis' or 'analyzers' as tools but maintain parallel structure. Use 'store data on it' not 'in this'.

× And when I I am free on Sunday I love to type on laptop because I can sit in my.

✓ When I am free on Sundays, I love to type on my laptop because I can sit comfortably at home.

Remove duplicate 'I'. Use plural 'Sundays' or 'on Sunday' consistently. Add possessive 'my laptop'. Complete the phrase 'sit in my' which was incomplete; clarify location, e.g., 'sit comfortably at home'.

× During my graduation days, my father gifted me my own personal computer and I was delighted.

✓ During my university years, my father gifted me my own personal computer, and I was delighted.

'Graduation days' is nonstandard; use 'during my university years' or 'when I was at university'. Add comma before conjunction joining independent clauses.

× At that time I started typing all my own without taking any formal training.

✓ At that time I started typing on my own without taking any formal training.

Use the idiom 'on my own' not 'all my own'. Keep past simple 'started' is correct; add preposition 'on' for the phrase.

× Later on I realized that and I downloaded an online typing tutor app and I learned by myself and in the end my son taught me.

✓ Later on I realized that I needed help, so I downloaded an online typing tutor app and learned by myself, and in the end my son taught me some techniques.

Original has fragments and repeated conjunctions. Make sequence clear: realized (past), downloaded (past), learned (past). Clarify what was realized; otherwise sentence is vague. Add object 'some techniques' to show what son taught.

× Initially I tried myself I just copy the text and type on and later on I realized I should have some formal training so I joined online classes that helps me to improve my speed and accuracy by educating me over finger placement and my son taught me lots of shortcut and I.

✓ Initially I tried by myself: I just copied text and typed, and later I realized I should have some formal training, so I joined online classes that helped me improve my speed and accuracy by teaching me finger placement. My son also taught me many shortcuts.

Sentence contains multiple tense and structure errors. Use past simple for past actions ('copied', 'typed', 'realized', 'joined', 'helped', 'taught'). 'Tried myself' should be 'tried by myself'. 'Helps me' should be 'helped me' to match past context. Use 'teach' not 'educate me over'. 'Shortcuts' plural and complete final clause; remove trailing 'and I'.