Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve açık olmalı. Konu cümlesinde doğrudan tercihinizi belirtin, sonra sebepleri mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "it's your safe time" yerine "it saves time"). Cümle sayısını 3–4 arasında tutun ve gereksiz tekrar yapmayın.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it saves time and is more comfortable. For example, I can type documents much faster and I don't get hand cramps when writing for a long time.

제안: Cevabınızı doğrudan ve gramatik olarak doğru verin. Konu cümlesinde hangi cihazı kullandığınızı söyleyin, sonra nedenini bağlaçla açıklayın. "more easier" gibi çift karşılaştırma hatalarından kaçının; doğru kullanım "easier" veya "more comfortable" şeklindedir.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's more convenient and portable than a desktop. For instance, I can use it in different rooms or take it with me when I travel.

제안: Tarih veya yaş söylerken doğru yapı kullanın (ör. "when I was five"). Ayrıca neden ya da koşulu belirtirken uygun zaman kiplerini kullanın ve özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin ("my dad used" veya "my dad uses"). Cevabı kısa ve net tutun, ardından kısa bir detay ekleyin.

예시: I learned to type when I was five because my dad often used his laptop and showed me the basics. As a result, I became comfortable with the keyboard at an early age.

제안: Cevap net olmalı ve doğrudan kendi yöntemlerinizi anlatmalısınız. Genel talimat vermekten ziyade kendi deneyiminizi ve belirli yöntemleri söyleyin (ör. online typing tests, daily drills, posture). Ayrıca son cümlenizin "At your handwriting" kısmı alakasız; onu çıkarın veya yerine uygun bir bağlam koyun.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and doing daily accuracy drills. I also focus on proper posture and take short breaks to avoid strain.

× I prefer typing because it's your safe time and it's comfortable.

✓ I prefer typing because it saves time and is comfortable.

The sentence uses the incorrect pronoun 'your' and an ungrammatical phrase 'safe time'. Replace 'your' with 'it' to refer to typing in general. Use the verb 'save' in the simple present to express a general truth: 'it saves time'. Also make the second clause parallel by using 'is comfortable' rather than 'it's comfortable' to avoid repetition; alternatively 'and it's comfortable' is acceptable but 'is comfortable' makes the structure cleaner.

× I do type laptop keyboard and every morning because it's more easier than desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every morning because it's easier than on a desktop.

The phrase 'do type laptop keyboard' is ungrammatical: use the simple present 'I type', include the preposition 'on' for 'on a laptop keyboard', and place time expression 'every morning' appropriately. 'More easier' is a redundancy; 'easier' is the correct comparative form. Add 'on a desktop' or 'on desktop' with preposition for clarity.

× I learned it in my 5 years old because my dad use everyday laptop keyboard.

✓ I learned it when I was five years old because my dad used a laptop keyboard every day.

Use the past tense consistently: 'learned' requires 'when I was five years old' rather than 'in my 5 years old'. 'My' is incorrect here. Also 'use' should be past tense 'used' to match the time frame. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective; use the adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words) after the verb. Include the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'.

× I think you do more practice and exercise. At your handwriting.

✓ I think you should practice more and do exercises to improve your handwriting.

The original uses 'you do more practice and exercise' which is unnatural; use modal 'should' to give advice. 'Practice' as a verb fits better than the noun phrase 'do more practice'. 'Exercise' in this context is better as plural 'exercises' or 'exercises/practice exercises'. 'At your handwriting' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'to improve your handwriting' to express purpose.