Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on accuracy, clarity and natural phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'convenient' not 'cooker'), and a brief reason with one supporting detail. Avoid vague references like 'generation GZ' unless you explain them.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient and faster. For example, I can edit and organize my notes easily on a computer, which saves me time. Many people from younger generations tend to use typing more because they grew up with computers and smartphones.

제안: Start with a direct answer (desktop/laptop), then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Use comparative structure correctly ('easier to use').

예시: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because I don’t own a laptop. However, I would like to use a laptop because it’s more portable and easier to use when I travel.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and add a brief supporting detail. Use past tense correctly and avoid extra filler words like 'Yeah.'

예시: I learned to type in the sixth grade when my IT teacher taught us formal typing techniques. We practiced touch-typing exercises every week, which helped me improve quickly.

제안: Answer directly about current or past improvement methods and be specific. Use correct tense and clear linkers (e.g., 'for example,' 'also'). Describe what you did and the result.

예시: To improve my typing I practiced regularly and took part in a school typing competition in seventh grade. For example, I did daily typing drills to increase my speed and accuracy, and as a result my words-per-minute score improved noticeably.

× I always prefer typing because it's more comfortable and more cooker than handwriting.

✓ I always prefer typing because it's more comfortable and cooler than handwriting.

The adjective 'cooker' is incorrect; the correct comparative form for 'cool' is 'cooler'. Also using two comparatives 'more comfortable and cooler' is fine. Suggestion: use 'cooler' for temperature or style meaning, and ensure correct adjective forms.

× I think it depends on people who born in generation GZ.

✓ I think it depends on the people who were born in generation GZ.

Missing relative clause structure and auxiliary verb for passive 'born'. Add definite article 'the' because referring to a specific group. Use past passive 'were born'. Suggestion: include 'the' and 'were' before 'born' to form correct passive relative clause.

× I usually use desktop because I don't have any laptop keyboard, but I want to use laptop keyboard because I think laptop is more easy to using.

✓ I usually use a desktop because I don't have a laptop, but I want to use a laptop keyboard because I think a laptop is easier to use.

Missing articles: 'a desktop' and 'a laptop'. 'Any' is unnecessary here. 'More easy' is incorrect; use comparative 'easier'. Also 'to using' is wrong; after 'easy' use the infinitive 'to use'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and use 'easier to use'.

× When I was 6th grade student, my IT teachers started to teaching how to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was a 6th-grade student, my IT teachers started teaching me how to type on a keyboard.

Missing article 'a' and hyphenate '6th-grade' as a compound adjective. 'Started to teaching' is incorrect; use 'started teaching' or 'began to teach'. Also include object 'me' after 'teaching'. Suggestion: use 'started teaching me' or 'began to teach me'.

× When I was 7th grade student, my school organized a competition about how to improve typing skill and who will type in a lot of words.

✓ When I was a 7th-grade student, my school organized a competition about improving typing skills and who could type the most words.

Again add article 'a' and hyphenate '7th-grade'. 'About how to improve typing skill' is awkward; change to 'about improving typing skills'. 'Who will type in a lot of words' is ungrammatical; change to 'who could type the most words' to express the intended competition format. Suggestion: use 'improving typing skills' and 'who could type the most words'.

× So I want that competition.

✓ So I wanted to join that competition.

Tense mismatch and pronoun/verb choice: 'want that competition' is unnatural. Since talking about past event, use past tense 'wanted' and appropriate verb 'join' or 'participate in'. Suggestion: say 'I wanted to join that competition' or 'I participated in that competition' depending on meaning.