Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的誤りが多く、意味が取りにくいです。まずトピックセンテンスで直接答え（I prefer typing. など）を述べ、その理由を1〜2文で具体的に説明してください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って文をつなぎ、語順や時制（used to / now）を正しく使う練習をしましょう。語彙は“highlighting”は文脈に合わないので“handwriting”と対比する表現を使ってください。練習方法：短い明確な文を作り、音読して流暢さと発音を直す。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I study I can quickly correct mistakes and organize notes, so typing saves me time and helps me keep everything neat.

제안: 答えが曖昧で無関係な語句（"liking any lepers"など）が混じっています。まず質問に直接答えて（Yes, I use a laptop every day. など）、その後で理由や具体例を1文加えてください。不要な繰り返しを避け、現在形や進行形を正しく使う練習をしてください。語彙は"enroll in university"や"laptop/desktop"など正しいフレーズを学びましょう。

예시: Yes, I use a laptop every day because I need it for university applications and studying. I usually work on assignments and research on my laptop in the evening.

제안: 答えは概ね分かるが、時制や理由の説明が混同しており、あいまいな言い回しが多いです。質問には過去時制で簡潔に答え（I learned in junior high school.）、続けて具体的な状況（at school, computer lessons, age）を1文で説明しましょう。ためらいや繰り返しを避け、接続詞（because, so）で理由を明確にしてください。

예시: I learned to type in junior high school because the school introduced computer lessons then. As a result, I practiced during class and improved my speed over the next few years.

제안: 回答は意味が伝わるが文法と表現が不自然です。まず簡潔に方法を述べ（I improve my typing by practicing regularly.）、具体例（writing reports, using typing websites, timed practice）を1文加えてください。否定＋肯定の構造は避け、正しい不定詞や動名詞（practice typing / write reports）を使いましょう。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing a lot and writing reports for my university applications. Sometimes I use online typing tests to measure my speed and focus on accuracy.

× I used to prefer highlighting, but now I often use typing because my skills gave to me computers to study.

✓ I used to prefer handwriting, but now I often use typing because my skills helped me use computers to study.

The sentence has several issues: 'highlighting' seems semantically wrong for choosing handwriting — corrected to 'handwriting'. 'use typing' should be 'use typing' is acceptable but adjusted for clarity. 'gave to me computers' is incorrect preposition and verb choice; use 'helped me use computers' which correctly expresses cause and purpose. Also 'to study' correctly placed after 'computers'. Suggestion: use 'helped me' or 'enabled me' + base verb, and avoid 'gave to me'.

× Yes, because at now I have to study to enroll the university so I I I'm liking any lepers. At my with my computer.

✓ Yes, because right now I have to study to get into university, so I like any laptops. I use my computer a lot.

Multiple issues: 'at now' should be 'right now' (time expression). 'to enroll the university' needs correct collocation: 'get into university' or 'enroll in the university'. 'I I I'm liking' is ungrammatical; English does not use 'like' in continuous here; use 'I like'. 'any lepers' is incorrect word choice and spelling — likely 'laptops'. 'At my with my computer' is ungrammatical; clarified to 'I use my computer a lot.' Suggestions: use correct time phrases, verb forms, and prepositions like 'enroll in' or 'get into'.

× I learned when I was in junior high school, uh, because when I was in high school, I, I got computers at school to study, to use at study.

✓ I learned when I was in junior high school. When I was in high school, I got access to computers at school to study.

Run-on and awkward phrasing. 'learned when I was in junior high school' is fine but second clause repeats time; separate sentences improve clarity. 'got computers at school' is acceptable but 'got access to computers at school' is more natural. 'to use at study' is incorrect preposition order; use 'to study' or 'for studying'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistent and use natural collocations like 'got access to' and 'for studying'.

× I don't do any practice to typing but so I just type a lot. I I'm typing all day all night because I have to write report to entering the university.

✓ I don't do any formal typing practice, but I just type a lot. I type all day and night because I have to write reports to enter university.

'do any practice to typing' uses wrong preposition; use 'practice typing' or 'typing practice'. 'but so' is redundant; use 'but'. 'I I'm typing' remove repetition. 'I type all day and night' uses simple present for habitual action; original continuous is acceptable but simple present is clearer. 'write report to entering the university' is incorrect: use plural 'reports' if multiple, and 'to enter university' or 'to enter the university' where 'enter' follows 'to'. Suggestions: use correct noun phrases ('typing practice'), correct infinitive 'to enter', and consistent verb tense for habits.