Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cümle yapısını ve dilbilgisini düzeltmeye odaklanın. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için kısa bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın, ardından gerekçenizi bağlaçlarla (because, although, however) destekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ve kelime uyumuna dikkat edin (örneğin "have developed" → "has developed", "more easier" → "easier"). Ayrıca "nostalgic" kullanımını örnekle destekleyin.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better. Although typing is more convenient and faster, I enjoy the tactile experience of writing by hand, especially when I look back at old notes that remind me of past experiences.

제안: Cümleleri daha akıcı ve tutarlı hale getirin; tekrarlardan kaçının. Konu cümlesiyle başlayın (e.g. "I usually type on my phone rather than a laptop"). Sebepleri açık ve spesifik örneklerle destekleyin (portability, battery life, convenience). Dilbilgisi düzeltmeleri yapın: "it's more easy" → "it's easier", gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

예시: I usually type on my phone rather than a laptop because it's more portable and convenient. For instance, I can reply to messages or take notes on the go without carrying a heavy device.

제안: Daha net bir yapı kullanın: açık bir zaman ifadesiyle başlayın ve ardından kısa destekleyici ayrıntılar verin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu seslerini (umm, I, I) azaltın. İfade hatalarını düzeltin ("back in the Times" muhtemelen "back then" olmalı). Duygusal detayları kısa bir örnekle güçlendirin.

예시: I learned to type when I was in second grade at elementary school. I often typed short stories on my father's computer because I loved writing, and I even imagined publishing them one day; those memories make me nostalgic.

제안: Daha organize ve etkili bir açıklama yapın: kısa bir ana cümleyle başlayıp uyguladığınız yöntemi mantıksal bağlantılarla açıklayın. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve daha uygun kelime/sıralama kullanın ("I improve my typing by practising regularly"). Ayrıca daha spesifik pratik örnekleri ekleyin (typing tests, online exercises).

예시: I improve my typing by practising regularly because repetition builds speed and accuracy. For example, I set aside ten minutes each day to type random sentences or short paragraphs and use online typing tests to track my progress.

× The technology have developed and it made everything a lot more easier than before, for example typing.

✓ The technology has developed and it has made everything a lot easier than before, for example typing.

The subject 'the technology' is singular, so the verb must be 'has' not 'have'. Also 'made everything a lot easier' requires present perfect 'has made' to connect development with its result; remove the extra 'more' before 'easier' because 'more easier' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'has developed' and 'has made' and say 'a lot easier'.

× it made everything a lot more easier than before, for example typing.

✓ it has made everything a lot easier than before, for example typing.

'More easier' is redundant and grammatically incorrect because 'easier' already expresses comparative; do not add 'more'. Use 'a lot easier' or 'much easier'. Also use present perfect 'has made' to link past development to present state.

× I prefer handwriting, even though typing is a lot easier.

✓ I prefer handwriting, even though typing is much easier.

While grammatically acceptable, 'a lot easier' is informal; 'much easier' is clearer. No pronoun error but improvement suggested for register and clarity.

× I type mostly on keyboard, laptop keyboard, but I do not use computer that much.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop keyboard, but I do not use a computer that much.

Use the article 'a' before 'laptop' and 'computer'. Word order: 'mostly type on a laptop keyboard' sounds more natural. Articles are required for singular countable nouns.

× I mostly use my phone because it's a lot easier to carry around and it's more easy and and light.

✓ I mostly use my phone because it's much easier to carry around and it's lighter.

'More easy' is incorrect; use comparative 'easier'. 'Lighter' is comparative adjective, and avoid repeating 'and'. Use 'much easier' and 'lighter' for correct comparatives.

× So I would prefer to use my phone a lot more than the computer actually.

✓ So I would prefer to use my phone much more than the computer, actually.

Use 'much more' instead of 'a lot more' for smoother register; add comma before 'actually'. 'The computer' can be kept but earlier sentence recommends 'a computer' — maintain consistency.

× I started to type on keyboard when I was a second grader in elementary school.

✓ I started to type on a keyboard when I was in second grade in elementary school.

Use 'a keyboard' with article. Correct phrase is 'in second grade' not 'was a second grader' for smoother expression. 'Started to type' is acceptable but 'started typing' is more natural.

× I, I used to write stories, type stories on my father's computer.

✓ I used to write and type stories on my father's computer.

Remove filler repetition and combine verbs with 'and' to avoid awkward listing. 'Write and type stories' is concise and clear.

× I actually had so many stories that I've written back in the Times and I actually wanted to publish them And when I was like a child because I was sure that they were perfect, but I missed those times.

✓ I actually had so many stories that I had written back then and I wanted to publish them when I was a child because I was sure they were perfect, and I miss those times.

Mixing past perfect and present perfect/confusing chronology: use 'had written' or 'wrote' and keep past tense 'wanted' and 'was' consistent. 'Back in the Times' is unclear — use 'back then'. Use 'miss' or 'missed' depending on meaning; present 'I miss those times' expresses present feeling.

× I improve my typing, my typing more actually, because the more you type, the more you get good at it and be fast about it.

✓ I improve my typing more actually, because the more you type, the better and faster you get at it.

Use 'improve my typing more' (remove duplicate), and comparative structure: 'the more you type, the better and faster you get' — use adjective 'better' not 'get good' and parallel structure 'better and faster'.

× The method I use is actually, I think of a sentence and or a paragraph, anything that just pops into my mind.

✓ The method I use is actually to think of a sentence or a paragraph, anything that pops into my mind.

Use infinitive 'to think' after 'is', remove 'and or' which is incorrect — use 'or'. Also remove unnecessary 'just'.

× I try to be quick about it and just type it on the computer.

✓ I try to be quick about it and just type it on the computer.

Sentence is acceptable; minor suggestion: keep as is. No conjunction error requiring change.