Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 主なポイントに直接答え、冗長な言い回しや繰り返しを避け、発音や文法の自然さを改善しましょう。具体的には：1) 主題文を明確にする（例: "I prefer typing.") 2) 理由を一つか二つに絞り、接続詞（because, because of this, however）を使って論理的に繋げる。3) 不確かな表現（"maybe", 過度の uh）を減らし、語形（handwritten, not used to using a PC）を正しく使う。4) 文は最大5文に収める。これにより自然さと効果が上がります。

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and more accurate for me. For example, I can correct mistakes quickly and use tools like spell-check. However, some people think handwritten notes look more personal and trustworthy. Overall, typing suits my daily tasks better.

제안: 文法の自然さと具体性を高めましょう。主節を明確にし、過去や現在の一致、単数・複数の一致（each student is given）を正しく使うこと。理由を一つに絞り、具体的な用途（writing essays, researching）を付け加えると良いです。冗長な表現を避け、接続詞で文を繋いで流れを良くしてください。

예시: I use a laptop every day because my school provides each student with a personal computer. We use these PCs mainly for writing essays and researching for assignments, so I rely on a keyboard for most of my study tasks.

제안: 回答は過去の時点を聞かれているので、いつ（年齢や学年）学んだかを明確に答えましょう。現在完了や過去形の使い分けに注意し、冗長な副詞（just, like, yeah）を減らして簡潔に述べる。具体例（age/grade, frequency）を加えると説得力が増します。

예시: I learned to type when I was about 10 years old at primary school. Since then we have used laptops daily, so by regularly writing reports and essays I gradually developed faster typing skills.

제안: 改善方法を具体的に述べ、練習方法や頻度、使っているツール（typing tutors, online exercises）を挙げてください。文法（I use, which helps me）を正しくして、同じ内容の繰り返しを避けると回答がより効果的になります。接続詞で因果関係を明確にしましょう。

예시: I improve my typing mainly by daily practice while writing essays and reports. I also use online typing tutors and do short timed exercises for 10–15 minutes a day, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× I more prefer typing because for me it is faster and more accurate.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster and more accurate for me.

This sentence uses an incorrect comparative structure 'more prefer' and a slightly awkward word order. Use the simple verb 'prefer' (no 'more') and place the reason phrase after the main clause for natural English. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + noun/gerund and follow with the reason: 'I prefer typing because...'.

× On the other hand, maybe some people said that uh handwrited text is more trustworthy or some people are not used to uh do something with uh PC, so they cannot really type faster.

✓ On the other hand, some people say that handwritten text is more trustworthy, or some people are not used to using a PC, so they cannot really type quickly.

Multiple errors: 'handwrited' is incorrect; use the adjective 'handwritten' (past participle used adjectivally). 'Maybe' and 'said' mismatch tense and modality—use present 'say' for general statements. 'Not used to do something with PC' is wrong: after 'used to' use a gerund: 'used to using a PC'. 'PC' needs an article 'a'. Use 'quickly' (adverb) instead of 'faster' when comparing to an unstated baseline. Suggest: 'some people say... handwritten... not used to using a PC... type quickly.'

× Yeah, I use laptop or desktop keyboard every day because in my school each students are given individual PC and used.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop or desktop keyboard every day because at my school each student is given an individual PC and uses it.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'each students are' is wrong—'each' must be followed by a singular noun 'student' and singular verb 'is given' or passive 'is given'. Also 'used' is incomplete; clarify 'and uses it' to show students use the PCs. Add articles: 'a laptop' and 'an individual PC'. Use 'at my school' rather than 'in my school' for naturalness.

× We used it as a study tool.

✓ We use it as a study tool.

Tense inconsistency: the context is habitual (every day), so present simple 'use' is correct instead of past 'used'. Keep tense consistent with other present-tense statements.

× So I use it every day for my study.

✓ So I use it every day for my studies.

Countable/uncountable noun issue: 'study' as an activity is usually expressed as 'my studies' when referring to schoolwork. 'For my studies' is the natural collocation.

× As I said you before, in my school students all have their individual laptop so we just use it daily and I just naturally acquired how to do like fast typing skill and yeah, I actually writing reports or essay every day.

✓ As I told you before, at my school all students have their own laptops, so we use them every day. I naturally acquired fast typing skills because I actually write reports and essays every day.

Multiple structural issues: 'As I said you before' should be 'As I told you before'. Word order 'students all have' is awkward; use 'all students have'. 'Individual laptop' -> 'their own laptops' (plural). 'We just use it daily' -> 'we use them every day' (plural agreement). 'I just naturally acquired how to do like fast typing skill' is ungrammatical; express as 'I naturally acquired fast typing skills'. 'I actually writing' needs finite verb: 'I actually write reports and essays every day.' These corrections fix subject-verb agreement, pluralization, verb forms, and word order.

× Yeah, as I said you before, I using laptop to do my work particularly about essay or reports and that make that helps me a lot to practice my typing skill.

✓ As I said before, I use a laptop to do my work, particularly essays and reports, and that helps me a lot to practice my typing skills.

'I using' is incorrect; use 'I use' (base verb). 'As I said you before' -> 'As I said before' or 'As I told you before'. 'Particularly about essay or reports' should be 'particularly essays and reports'. 'That make that helps' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'that helps me a lot' suffices. 'Typing skill' -> plural 'typing skills' or 'my typing' is more natural.

× So I think that that was a significant things for me.

✓ So I think that was a significant thing for me.

Number agreement: 'a significant things' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'things'. Use singular 'thing' with 'a', or drop 'a' and use plural 'things'. Also double 'that that' is redundant; one 'that' is enough. Suggested: 'So I think that was significant for me' or '...a significant thing for me.'