Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 시제 사용을 바로잡고 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 예를 들어 시제를 일관되게 유지하고 비교 이유를 구체적으로 제시하면 좋습니다. 또한 'much more faster' 같은 중복 표현을 피하고, 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

예시: I used to prefer handwriting when I was younger, but now I prefer typing because it's faster and allows me to record more information quickly. For example, I can take notes during lectures without missing key points.

제안: 응답을 더 간결하고 자연스럽게 만들고, 예시를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 'I use it for almost everything'처럼 표현을 다듬고, 연결어(so, because)를 적절히 사용해 이유를 명확히 하세요.

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I use it for studying, online shopping, and researching information. As a result, I spend several hours typing each day, especially when I'm working on assignments.

제안: 어휘와 발음 실수를 줄이고 문장을 더 정확하게 구성하세요. 'black breaks'는 의미가 불명확하므로 정확한 표현('breaks' 또는 'lunch breaks')을 사용하고, 중복 단어(typing typing)를 피하세요. 또한 구체적인 시간 표현과 간단한 세부사항을 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다.

예시: I don't remember the exact year, but I learned to type in elementary school during computer classes. During breaks, my friends and I would have typing speed competitions, which helped me improve quickly.

제안: 좋은 응답입니다. 다만 구체적인 연습 방법(연습 시간, 사용 앱, 연습 종류)을 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 또한 연결어를 활용해 문장 흐름을 더 매끄럽게 하세요.

예시: My Korean typing improved a lot when I played online games in high school because I needed to chat quickly. However, I'm slower in English, so I practice daily using online typing tutors for 20 minutes and focus on common English phrases to build speed.

× When I was younger I preferred handwriting, but these days I preferred typing because it is much more faster.

✓ When I was younger I preferred handwriting, but these days I prefer typing because it is much faster.

The student used 'preferred' for a current habitual action; present simple 'prefer' is required for current preferences. Also 'much more faster' is redundant; use 'much faster' or 'more fast' (more fast is incorrect), so 'much faster' is correct. Suggestion: use present simple for current habits and avoid redundant comparatives.

× I use it from almost everything such as studying, shopping and searching for information.

✓ I use it for almost everything such as studying, shopping and searching for information.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; use 'for' to indicate purpose or usage. Suggestion: use 'for' with 'almost everything' to show functions or activities.

× So I feel like I type almost all day.

✓ So I feel like I am typing almost all day.

The phrase 'feel like' followed by an activity usually takes the -ing form; 'I feel like I type' is grammatically acceptable but sounds unnatural when describing an ongoing habit; 'I feel like I am typing almost all day' emphasizes the continuous action. Suggestion: use progressive form to express ongoing activity.

× Oh, I don't remember exactly but I think it was in elementary school.

✓ Oh, I don't remember exactly but I think it was in elementary school.

This sentence is correct; no change necessary. It is retained because the past reference 'was' is appropriate. (No correction needed.)

× We had computer classes at school, so during black breaks my friend and I used to have typing typing speed competitions.

✓ We had computer classes at school, so during breaks my friend and I used to have typing speed competitions.

There is a typo 'black breaks' which should be 'breaks'. Repetition 'typing typing' should be a single 'typing'. 'Used to have' correctly indicates a past repeated action. Suggestion: proofread for typing errors and keep 'used to' for past habitual events.

× My Korean typing speed improved a lot when I started playing computer games in high school.

✓ My Korean typing speed improved a lot when I started playing computer games in high school.

This sentence is correct; past tense 'improved' and 'started' properly refer to past events. (No correction needed.)

× I had to type quickly to chat with my friends while playing.

✓ I had to type quickly to chat with my friends while playing.

This sentence is correct; past tense 'had to' fits the context of past necessity. (No correction needed.)

× I am still not as fast in English as I am in Korean, so I try to practice English typing regularly.

✓ I am still not as fast in English as I am in Korean, so I try to practice English typing regularly.

This sentence is grammatically correct: present simple 'try' and present continuous 'am' are used appropriately for current state and habitual action. (No correction needed.)