Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix tense/phrasing errors (e.g., "my hands would hurt"), and avoid hesitations like "uh."

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and much faster. For example, when I have long assignments, typing prevents my hands from getting tired and lets me edit work quickly.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, then add concise supporting details with linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "doesn't require daily typing"). Avoid repeating words and keep to two or three short sentences.

예시: No, I don't type on a desktop daily because my job doesn't require it. Instead, I use my desktop occasionally for essays, and I usually use my phone to message friends and family.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and more coherent sequence. Use linking words like "so" or "because" correctly and correct plural/tense errors ("their colleagues helped me"). Keep it to two sentences maximum and be specific about age or situation.

예시: I learned to type when I was a child because I often spent afternoons at my parents' office. Their colleagues encouraged and helped me practice, so I picked up basic typing skills early on.

제안: State the method directly, then explain how it helps with a clear cause-effect link. Correct grammar ("I have been playing the piano"; "it has helped my typing"). Use one or two concise sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: I have been playing the piano since childhood, which improved my finger dexterity. As a result, my hands are faster and more coordinated, and that has helped me become a better typist.

× I prefer typing because it is very convenient and faster than writing by your hand.

✓ I prefer typing because it is very convenient and faster than writing by hand.

Using 'your hand' is incorrect in this context; the general expression is 'writing by hand' (no possessive). Replace 'your hand' with 'hand' to refer generally to handwriting. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× And nowadays uh, I have long assignments that I couldn't use pen for this because my hands gonna hurt so I try.

✓ Nowadays I have long assignments, so I can't use a pen because my hands are going to hurt, so I try to type.

Multiple issues: 'couldn't use pen for this' needs article 'a pen' (article error, ID 22). 'my hands gonna hurt' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'my hands are going to hurt' (future/colloquial correction, ID 7). Also sentence structure improved by splitting and ordering ideas clearly (sentence structure error, ID 26). The corrected sentence uses proper articles, verb forms, and clear connectors. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× No I don't, my work doesn't need everyday typing so I don't often type anything on my desktop and it is just for my essays and if I want to communicate with my friends and family I use my phone to type.

✓ No, I don't. My work doesn't require daily typing, so I don't often type on my desktop; I use it only for essays. If I want to communicate with my friends and family, I use my phone to type.

'doesn't need everyday typing' is awkward; use 'doesn't require daily typing' (present tense, ID 6). 'everyday' as adjective should be 'daily' or 'every day' depending on form. Sentence run-on fixed into shorter sentences for clarity (sentence structure, ID 26). Also removed 'anything' which is unnecessary. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× When I was younger, I came back from school every day to my parents' office, so I didn't have a lot to do and for as a hobby.

✓ When I was younger, I returned from school every day to my parents' office, so I didn't have a lot to do and I did it as a hobby.

'came back' is acceptable but 'returned' is more natural; main issue is 'and for as a hobby' which is ungrammatical. Use 'I did it as a hobby' to express purpose in the past (past tense correction, ID 5). Also maintain past tense consistently. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I tried to type on a keyboard and their colleagues help me to type.

✓ I tried to type on a keyboard and my parents' colleagues helped me.

'their colleagues' is unclear and incorrect; refer back to 'my parents' so use 'my parents' colleagues' (pronoun reference, ID 12). Also change 'help me to type' to past tense 'helped me' to match the past context (past tense, ID 5). Remove redundant 'to type'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I have playing the piano since I was a child so my hand is really fast when I'm playing the piano and because of that I could helped my typing to be better as I grew up.

✓ I have been playing the piano since I was a child, so my hands became very fast when I play, and because of that my typing has improved as I grew up.

Multiple grammar issues: 'I have playing' is incorrect; use present perfect continuous 'I have been playing' (verb -ing/form issue, ID 8 and present tense, ID 6). 'my hand is really fast when I'm playing the piano' should be 'my hands are very fast when I play' (plural agreement and adjective use, IDs 1 and 13). 'I could helped' mixes modal/past forms; use 'has improved' or 'helped my typing improve' (past participle/tense issue, IDs 9 and 5). Reordered sentence for clarity (sentence structure, ID 26). Grammar problem type ID: 26