Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và chính xác câu hỏi. Trong câu trả lời hiện tại có lỗi (“driving” thay vì “typing”) gây nhầm lẫn. Giữ cấu trúc ngắn gọn (1-3 câu), sửa lỗi từ vựng, dùng liên từ để nối ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích đánh máy (ví dụ: tốc độ, khả năng chỉnh sửa, lưu trữ).

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and allows me to edit my work easily. For example, I write essays and emails on my laptop every day, which saves time and makes revisions simple.

제안: Trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần tránh những cụm từ lặp lại và sửa cấu trúc nhỏ (“try on a laptop” không chính xác). Giữ tối đa 4 câu, sử dụng từ liên kết để giải thích tình huống sử dụng desktop. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của mỗi thiết bị nếu cần.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient, so I can work in different rooms. However, when I work for long periods at home, I sometimes use a desktop for greater comfort and a larger screen.

제안: Trả lời rõ ràng, có thứ tự thời gian tốt. Để cải thiện, rút ngắn vài chỗ lặp ý và dùng một hoặc hai liên từ để làm mạch văn trôi chảy hơn. Có thể thêm chi tiết cụ thể về phương pháp luyện tập hoặc kết quả đạt được (tốc độ, chính xác).

예시: I learned to type when I was about 12 during computer lessons at school, where the teacher taught us the basics. After that, I practised a lot at home for homework, so now I use a keyboard every day for study and work.

제안: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một vài lỗi từ vựng và cụm từ (ví dụ “typing dance” không tự nhiên). Nên nêu rõ phương pháp và kết quả cụ thể, dùng liên từ để giải thích lợi ích của từng phương pháp. Giữ độ dài hợp lý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

예시: I improve my typing by practising on online typing websites and games, which help me increase speed and reduce mistakes. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day practising and try to touch-type without looking at the keyboard.

× Well, I prefer driving because it is very fast and I can edit my work easily so I have a safe time.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because it is very fast and I can edit my work easily, so I save time.

The student used 'driving' incorrectly instead of 'typing' which changes meaning; this is a sentence structure/word choice error. Also 'have a safe time' is incorrect English; the intended idea is 'save time'. Suggestion: choose the correct verb (typing) to match the context and use the common expression 'save time' rather than 'have a safe time'.

× For example, I write essays and emails on my laptop every day, but I sometimes handwrite quick notes when I am studying.

✓ For example, I write essays and emails on my laptop every day, but I sometimes handwrite quick notes when studying.

The clause 'when I am studying' is correct but can be more natural as a reduced clause 'when studying'. This is a style/tense simplification using present participle. Suggestion: use 'when studying' for conciseness and natural spoken English.

× Well, I usually try on a laptop because it's portable and convenient and I can work in different rooms.

✓ Well, I usually try a laptop because it's portable and convenient and I can work in different rooms.

The verb 'try on' is a phrasal verb meaning to put on clothing; here 'try a laptop' (meaning 'use a laptop') is correct. Suggestion: use 'try a laptop' or better 'use a laptop' to convey the intended meaning.

× For example, I write emails and study notes on it every day, but when I need to work and for a long time at home, I sometimes use a desktop for comfort.

✓ For example, I write emails and study notes on it every day, but when I need to work for a long time at home, I sometimes use a desktop for comfort.

The phrase 'need to work and for a long time' is ungrammatical; the correct structure is 'need to work for a long time'. Suggestion: place 'for a long time' directly after 'work' to form a coherent verb phrase.

× Well, I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was about 12 at school.

✓ Well, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was about 12 at school.

Both 'learned how to type' and 'learned to type' are grammatically acceptable, but 'learned to type' is more concise and common. This is a stylistic past-tense refinement. Suggestion: prefer 'learned to type' for smoother speech.

× Since then, I use a keyboard every day for study and work.

✓ Since then, I have used a keyboard every day for study and work.

When referring to an action that started in the past and continues to the present, present perfect tense ('have used') is required rather than simple present ('use'). Suggestion: use present perfect after time expressions like 'since then'.

× Well, I improve my typing by practicing with online typing dance and games because they help me get faster and make fewer mistakes.

✓ Well, I improve my typing by practicing with online typing drills and games because they help me get faster and make fewer mistakes.

The phrase 'typing dance' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice; 'typing drills' or 'typing exercises' fits the context. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Suggestion: use 'typing drills' or 'typing practice' to clearly express the idea.

× For example, I use typing website for 15 minutes every day and I try not to look at the keyboard.

✓ For example, I use a typing website for 15 minutes every day and I try not to look at the keyboard.

The noun phrase 'typing website' requires an article. Use 'a' for a non-specific single website. Suggestion: include the appropriate article ('a' or 'the') depending on specificity.