Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetitions, and avoid filler sounds (uh, um). Use precise vocabulary (easier, more convenient, faster).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop anytime without needing a pen, and digital text is easy to edit and share quickly.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail. Minimize hesitations and repeat fewer words. Use linking words to explain why.

예시: Yes, I type every day on a desktop because my job requires a lot of data entry. As a result, I usually work at a desktop station for several hours and use keyboard shortcuts to increase efficiency.

제안: Provide a concise timeline and one specific detail about learning to make the answer more vivid. Remove repeated words and fillers. Use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' if adding steps.

예시: I learned to type in my early teens at school. In computer class we began with basic lessons, and then I practiced at home to improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Give a structured response: state one or two specific methods and explain briefly how they help. Cut down on fillers and repeat key words less. Mention concrete resources (online tutors, apps) to show variety.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily with typing apps and exercises. For example, I use an online typing program for 20 minutes each day to build speed and accuracy, and I focus on using proper finger placement to reduce errors.

× I think I prep, I prefer typing, uh, because it's easier, uh, than handwriting.

✓ I think I prefer typing because it's easier than handwriting.

The original contains a filler 'prep' (likely 'prefer' repeated) and unnecessary filler words 'uh'. This is a sentence structure issue: remove the repeated/incorrect fragment and redundant fillers to form a clear sentence. Suggestion: say 'I think I prefer typing because it's easier than handwriting.' and avoid filler sounds in formal responses.

× Uh, it's easier. Uh, you don't need to have, uh, a pen or pencil to write.

✓ It's easier because you don't need a pen or pencil to write.

Using 'have' plus 'to have a pen' is natural but the sentence is disjointed by fillers and a separate short clause. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/structure leading to fragmentation. Combine clauses for clarity and remove fillers: 'It's easier because you don't need a pen or pencil to write.'

× Uh, you can write immediately on your phone.

✓ You can write directly on your phone.

'Immediately' implies time rather than manner; 'directly' is more natural to describe writing on the device. Also remove filler 'uh'. This is a sentence structure/word choice correction.

× Yes, I do, because my job is uh uh, on computer, so I usually use a desktop, uh, device, uh, to type every day.

✓ Yes, I do, because my job involves working on a computer, so I usually use a desktop device to type every day.

'My job is on computer' is ungrammatical. Use 'involves working on a computer' or 'is on a computer'. This fixes verb and preposition usage and clarifies meaning. Also remove filler repetitions.

× Uh, I think I first learned to type when I was at school in my early teens.

✓ I first learned to type when I was at school in my early teens.

The original is mostly correct but contains filler 'Uh, I think' which weakens the past-tense statement. Remove filler for a clear past-tense narration. The verb 'learned' is correctly in the past tense.

× I practiced, uh, on the laptop in computer class, and I remember starting starting with the basic lessons to improve my speed and, uh, accuracy.

✓ I practiced on the laptop in computer class, and I remember starting with the basic lessons to improve my speed and accuracy.

Repeating 'starting' is an error; fillers should be removed. Use present participle 'starting' only once. This corrects duplication and cleans up the sentence structure.

× I think people can improve their typing by practicing it a lot uh, as I do, uh, practicing it every day, uh, will let you know uh, how to use the keyboard uh, when you know how, uh, you can type faster.

✓ People can improve their typing by practicing a lot, as I do. Practicing every day helps you learn how to use the keyboard, and when you know how, you can type faster.

The original is run-on and filled with disfluent fillers, causing sentence structure problems. Break it into clear sentences, remove fillers, and use correct verb forms ('helps you learn') and conjunctions to show cause and effect. This yields clearer, grammatically correct statements.