Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and articles, and avoid repeating ideas (e.g., ‘helps me slow down’ and ‘helps me focus’ are similar). Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' to connect points.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me slow down and organize my thoughts. For example, when I jot down ideas in a notebook, the tactile feeling of the pen and paper makes it easier to focus and remember details.

제안: Provide a full sentence with correct grammar and avoid repetition. Begin with a topic sentence then add one clear reason using a linking word. Correct verb and article errors and remove duplicate words.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can take it to cafés or different rooms at home, so I don’t have to stay in one place.

제안: Use correct tense, articles, and clearer phrasing. Give a specific time and one brief reason or result. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., 'aisles writing test'). If you mean a specific exam, name it or say 'a writing test'.

예시: I learned to type in elementary school during computer class, but I didn't become competent until I started preparing for a writing exam a few years ago, which motivated me to practice regularly.

제안: Use a complete answer with a topic sentence and one or two specific methods. Avoid short fragments and be more specific about how you practice (timed exercises, online programs, posture). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises for 20 minutes each day and do timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy, which has gradually helped me type more confidently.

× It feels warm and vivid, and it helps me focus the moment, especially when I'm jot down ideas or planning.

✓ It feels warm and vivid, and it helps me focus on the moment, especially when I'm jotting down ideas or planning.

Missing preposition and incorrect verb form: 'focus' normally takes 'on' when followed by a noun phrase ('on the moment'). 'Jot' needs the -ing form 'jotting' after 'when' to show simultaneous action. Use 'jotting down' for the phrasal verb. Also keep parallel forms: 'jotting down ideas or planning'.

× Laptop keyboard because I think it is convenient and easy to take take it anywhere and I don't have to be stay in the same place.

✓ Laptop keyboard, because I think it is convenient and easy to take it anywhere and I don't have to stay in the same place.

Redundant word and incorrect auxiliary: remove duplicate 'take'. 'Be stay' is incorrect; use the base verb 'stay' after 'have to'. Add a comma after the introductory phrase. Ensure verb sequences are correct: 'have to stay' not 'have to be stay'.

× When I am elementary school in a computer class, but I'm not good at it until I started to prepare aisles writing test.

✓ When I was in elementary school I took a computer class, but I wasn't good at it until I started to prepare for the IELTS writing test.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: use past tense 'was' for a past state ('When I was in elementary school'). 'Took a computer class' is the correct verb phrase. Use past negative 'wasn't good' to match time. 'Until I started' keeps past but requires 'to prepare for' (preposition) and correct proper noun 'IELTS' and 'writing test'. Also remove incorrect 'aisles' and adjust sentence structure by removing the conjunction 'but' misuse or placing comma properly.

× The only way to improve my typing, I think, is practice over and over again. Keep practicing.

✓ The only way to improve my typing, I think, is to practice over and over again. Keep practicing.

Infinitive required: after 'is' when describing a method use the infinitive 'to practice' rather than the bare verb 'practice'. The standalone imperative 'Keep practicing.' is fine stylistically; keep as is.