Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly state preference, then give one or two clear reasons with specific details. Reduce hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid filler sounds.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me write much faster and edit my work easily. For example, when I organize events for a project, I use my laptop to draft schedules and update guest lists quickly.

제안: Answer directly which device and give concise reasons with specific examples. Avoid repeating words and use linking phrases like because and so that. Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I find it portable and convenient. For instance, I use it to take notes in meetings and to collect colleagues' feedback in shared documents so we can track important information efficiently.

제안: Give a clear time reference and a brief context with correct tense and fewer fillers. Use linking words to connect time and reason (when + because).

예시: I learned to type in 2011 when I was 11 years old. Later, during the coronavirus lockdown, I had more time at home, so I practiced typing more to improve my speed.

제안: Explain a clear method with specific steps and use correct vocabulary (practice, drills, typing tutor). Use linking words (first, then, finally) and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises. First I do warm-up drills for accuracy, then I practice timed passages to increase speed, and finally I track my progress with a typing tutor app.

× Yes, uh, I prefer typing to handwriting.

✓ Yes, I prefer typing to handwriting.

The original sentence has filler 'uh' which are disfluencies rather than grammar errors; remove them for clarity. No tense change needed. Suggest speaking more fluently and pausing instead of saying 'uh'.

× I sometimes use my laptop to do a tasks, uh, like, uh, about the project I run and uh, it hosts an event and uh, because I, I, I, I prefer it because, uh, it's easier to write quickly.

✓ I sometimes use my laptop to do tasks related to the project I run, and it hosts events. I prefer it because it's easier to write quickly.

Original uses 'a tasks' which mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'tasks' (singular and plural issue). Also sentence is run-on and repetitive. Remove fillers, correct 'a tasks' to 'tasks' or 'a task'. Clarify verbs: 'it hosts an event' -> 'it hosts events' to match general statement. Improve punctuation and combine related ideas.

× Yes, definitely I everyday use it and type it and the laptop.

✓ Yes, I use it every day and type on the laptop.

Word order and adverb placement are incorrect: 'everyday' as adjective vs adverb 'every day'. Also 'type it and the laptop' is ungrammatical; correct verb phrase is 'type on the laptop'. Place adverb 'every day' after the subject or after the verb. Use present simple 'use' for habitual action.

× Uh yeah, uh, so it's yeah easier and to uh write down my opinions and also collect others opinion and uh keeping we can uh, keep the something important in mind quicker and easier.

✓ It's easier to write down my opinions and also collect others' opinions, and we can keep important things in mind more quickly and easily.

Problems: missing possessive apostrophe in 'others' opinions' (incorrect use of pronouns/possessive), awkward word order 'keeping we can keep' and unnecessary fillers. Use plural 'opinions', possessive 'others'', and correct adverb 'more quickly'. Remove 'the' before 'something important' and use 'important things' for clarity.

× Since I was, uh, 2011, since I was 11, uh, in the like coronavirus going viral and then, uh, we had to stayed in home.

✓ Since 2011, when I was 11, during the coronavirus outbreak, we had to stay at home.

Errors: 'since I was 2011' is incorrect; use 'since 2011' or 'when I was 11'. 'Coronavirus going viral' is informal and awkward; use 'coronavirus outbreak'. 'Had to stayed' mixes past tense with past participle; correct form is 'had to stay'. Preposition 'in home' should be 'at home'.

× So, uh, like we like have to stay and this is that chance to learn something.

✓ So we had to stay home, and it was a chance to learn something.

Original has redundant 'like' and incorrect tense/agreement: 'we like have to stay' is ungrammatical. Match past context: 'we had to stay home' and 'it was a chance' for past opportunity. Remove fillers and clarify meaning.

× By typing randomly like I first started practice typing like IUL in Japanese and then we I moved on to the alphabet ABCDFD like that and I like really over and over typed at the different words.

✓ I improved by practicing typing: I first practiced typing in Japanese, then I moved on to the alphabet, and I typed different words over and over.

Errors: 'started practice typing' needs gerund 'practicing' or 'started to practice'; use consistent verb forms. 'IUL' unclear—assumed 'in Japanese'. 'we I moved' is wrong pronoun use and word order. 'over and over typed at the different words' has incorrect verb placement and unnecessary preposition 'at'; use 'typed different words over and over'. Use simple past 'practiced/moved' to match narrative.