Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并且句子更简洁，避免语法错误和重复。可以先给出主题句，然后用一到两个具体理由支持，使用连词例如 because / so / therefore 使结构清晰。注意动词时态和主语一致（例如 'I haven't been allowed' 或 'electronic devices are not allowed'）。删除多余重复的词语（如重复的 'before'）。

예시: I prefer handwriting because electronic devices are not allowed at my school, so I usually take handwritten notes and textbooks. Handwritten notes are easier to review, especially right before exams, because I can quickly flip through key points.

제안: 要避免犹豫词（uh, umm）和语法混乱，回答要简洁并给出具体原因与例子。使用连词如 because / so 来连接观点与解释，减少重复（如 'complicated' 两次）。句子不超过五句，并保持语法正确。

예시: No, I don't type on a keyboard every day because I find it challenging and my typing speed is slow. For example, I still use two fingers when I type, so it takes me much longer to finish school assignments.

제안: 回答时注意时态一致并减少语句重复，例如将 'when I'm when I am' 改为一次。明确时间点（e.g., 'this summer holiday'）后，可补充具体行动或目标。控制在五句话内，使用连接词 like because / so 来组织原因和目的。

예시: I started learning to type this summer holiday because I believe typing will be essential for my future career. For instance, I want to increase my speed to handle office tasks more efficiently at a large company.

제안: 回答要更具体，列出一到两个具体方法並用链接词（firstly, secondly, for example）。避免重复（如 'my my'）和不完整的从句。可以提到具体网站、练习类型或练习频率来增加细节。

예시: I improve my typing in several ways. Firstly, my mother recommended an online typing course and I practise on that website for 20 minutes every day. Secondly, I use typing games to improve accuracy and speed.

× I prefer handwriting more because it is more accessible in our school.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is more accessible at our school.

句中“in our school”用法不太自然，描述地点时常用“at our school”。另外“prefer handwriting more”中“more”多余，偏好动词“prefer”后直接接名词或动名词即可，不需要“more”。建议简单说“I prefer handwriting”并使用“at”来表示在学校的可及性。

× As you know, I've had electronic devices are not allowed in our school, so I can only bring some handwriting notes or textbooks.

✓ As you know, electronic devices are not allowed in our school, so I can only bring handwritten notes or textbooks.

原句“I've had electronic devices are not allowed”结构混乱，混合了完成时和陈述句，导致没有主谓一致。应直接陈述事实“electronic devices are not allowed”。另外“handwriting notes”应改为“handwritten notes”（手写的笔记），更符合英语习惯。

× Textbooks for revision and especially before before the start of the exam.

✓ I use textbooks for revision, especially before the start of an exam.

原句缺少谓语，且重复了“before”。需要补上主语和动词以构成完整句子，例如“I use textbooks for revision”。此外“before the start of the exam”前应加不定冠词或指示冠词，视上下文改为“an exam”或“the exam”。

× Uh, no, I don't type on the keyboard everyday because I'm looking, I'm not keen on it.

✓ Uh, no, I don't type on the keyboard every day because I'm not keen on it.

“everyday”为形容词，描述名词，如“everyday tasks”；表示“每天”应使用副词短语“every day”。原句中“I'm looking”多余且使句子不通顺，应删除。建议把否定句简化为“I don't type on the keyboard every day because I'm not keen on it.”

× I think it is very challenging and complicated, complicated task for me and I need time to practice it.

✓ I think it is a very challenging and complicated task for me, and I need time to practice.

原句重复“complicated”且缺少不定冠词“a”来修饰可数名词“task”。最后短语“practice it”可以简化为“practice”。建议使用“a very challenging and complicated task”并用逗号连接从句。

× So umm, until now my time is speed is very slow, so I don't like to use it and that's why I.

✓ So, up until now my typing speed has been very slow, so I don't like to use it, and that's why I avoid it.

原句“my time is speed is very slow”结构混乱，正确表达为“my typing speed has been very slow”使用现在完成时表示持续至今的状态。句末不完整“that's why I.”需补全原因或行为，例如“that's why I avoid it”。

× In this summer holiday, I'm trying to type in a very professional and fast way because I think typing is very essential for my future career, especially when I'm when I am working in a very big company or even some officers.

✓ This summer holiday, I'm trying to learn to type in a more professional and faster way because I think typing will be essential for my future career, especially when I work in a large company or as an office worker.

时间状语应为“This summer holiday”或“During this summer holiday”。“learn to type in a more professional and faster way”比“type in a very professional and fast way”更自然。谈及未来职业时应使用“will be essential”。“working in a very big company or even some officers”不通，“officers”误用，改为“as an office worker”或“in office jobs”。

× So I would like to utilize some these times to master these skills.

✓ So I would like to use this time to master these skills.

原句“utilize some these times”中同时使用了“some”和“these”导致指示不清且冗余。可以用“this time”指当前假期时间或“some of this time”。另外“utilize”较正式，用“use”更自然。建议简洁表达为“I would like to use this time to master these skills.”

× Firstly I ask my my mom for help and she told me that she just saw some website about how about the skills of typing and she recommended those websites to me and I can learn typing from that.

✓ First, I asked my mom for help and she told me that she had seen some websites about typing skills and recommended them to me, so I can learn to type from them.

句中时态不一致，叙述过去发生的事情应使用过去时“asked”/“had seen”。“some website”应改为复数“some websites”或加冠词“a website”。“about how about the skills of typing”结构错误，应为“about typing skills”或“how to type”。“those websites”可简称为“them”。此外“learn typing from that”应改为“learn to type from them”。