Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, with a good topic sentence and supporting reasons. To improve, make the sentence structure more varied and add a brief linking phrase to connect reasons (e.g., 'because' then 'which'), and avoid minor redundancy (e.g., 'penmanship' and 'handwriting' overlap). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences).

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and feel more studious. Moreover, practicing my penmanship improves the neatness of my notes, which makes reviewing easier.

제안: Good content and honesty, but reduce fillers like 'uh' and tighten phrasing. Start directly with a topic sentence, then add a short supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'but'). Also replace vague phrase 'if ever that I need' with clearer language.

예시: I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. Instead, I mainly type on my phone for messages and occasional school tasks because it's more convenient.

제안: Your answer gives specific information, which is good. Make the structure neater by leading with the time phrase, then briefly describe how you learned using a linking word like 'when' or 'where'. Avoid repeating synonyms (laptops, keyboards, computers) and unnecessary words.

예시: I learned to type in grade two at my school in Dubai. The teacher showed us simple tips and exercises to help us type more quickly and accurately.

제안: Solid answer with a practical method. To improve, be more specific: name a type of exercise or a routine and use a clear linking word like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Keep sentences concise and active.

예시: I improve my typing by practising on online typing sites. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day on speed and accuracy drills, which helps my finger coordination and reduces errors.

× Usually I would prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more studious and I get to practice my penmanship making me feel more productive.

✓ Usually I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more studious, and I get to practice my penmanship, which makes me feel more productive.

Original uses 'would prefer' which implies conditional/hypothetical; simple present 'prefer' is appropriate for habitual preference. Also the sentence needed punctuation and a relative clause 'which makes me feel more productive' to clarify cause. Suggest using simple present for routines and add commas to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID:4

× Uh, as a student I actually don't need to use a laptop or desktop daily, but I do type on my phone for communications or if ever that I need to do some school work.

✓ Uh, as a student I don't need to use a laptop or desktop every day, but I do type on my phone for communicating or when I need to do some schoolwork.

Use 'every day' (adverb + noun) instead of 'daily' here for natural speech. Remove 'actually' which is unnecessary. 'Communications' is awkward; use the gerund 'communicating'. 'If ever that I need' is unidiomatic — use 'when I need'. 'Schoolwork' is one word. These are present-tense habitual actions, so use present simple. Grammar problem type ID:20

× Back when I was grade 2 in my previous school at Dubai, UAE, they taught us how to use the keyboard by showing us tips and tricks on how to easily and quickly type on laptops and keyboards or computers.

✓ Back when I was in grade 2 at my previous school in Dubai, UAE, they taught us how to use the keyboard by showing us tips and tricks for typing quickly and easily on laptops or desktop computers.

Use 'in grade 2' and 'at my previous school' and 'in Dubai' for correct prepositions. Order of adverbs 'quickly and easily' is more natural. 'Laptops and keyboards or computers' is redundant; use 'laptops or desktop computers'. Use 'for typing' instead of 'on how to... type' to improve phrasing. This addresses past-tense context (they taught us) and preposition errors. Grammar problem type ID:5

× There are various online sites that people can go to in order to test their typing speed as well as their eye and hand coordination, so doing this helps me to improve my typing.

✓ There are various online sites where people can test their typing speed and their hand–eye coordination, so using them helps me improve my typing.

Replace 'that people can go to in order to' with 'where people can' for conciseness. Use 'hand–eye coordination' (standard order). 'Doing this helps me to improve my typing' is wordy; 'using them helps me improve my typing' is clearer and removes unnecessary 'to'. Also 'online sites' is fine with 'there are' (There-be correct). This corrects sentence structure and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:26