Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar errors, and provide one specific reason with an example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I make many typing mistakes on a keyboard. For example, when I write notes by hand I make fewer errors and can organize my thoughts better. Therefore, for important writing I usually choose handwriting.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and clarify the reason. Replace unclear phrases and avoid repetition. Use linking words like because or so to explain.

예시: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I am preparing for an exam and need to type essays and notes. Because I spend so much time on the computer, I also follow eye-care routines like taking breaks and adjusting screen brightness.

제안: Give a clear time reference and correct grammar. Remove fillers and use simple past tense. Add a brief detail about how you learned to make the answer specific.

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school. At that time our class had basic computer lessons and the teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and practice typing exercises.

제안: Answer directly with specific methods and correct word choices. Avoid vague phrases like "more pretext" and fillers. Use linking words to list methods (for example, by, and).

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. For example, I type daily emails and complete timed typing tests to increase speed and accuracy, which helps me finish papers within the time limit.

× I usually make mistake when I type in.

✓ I usually make mistakes when I type.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary; use plural 'mistakes' for general occurrence. Remove 'in' and pluralize 'mistake' to 'mistakes' to match general frequency. Suggestion: say 'I usually make mistakes when I type.'

× So I if I want to, uh, write some correct thing, I prefer you handwriting.

✓ So if I want to write something correctly, I prefer handwriting.

Pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; 'something' is the correct pronoun and 'correct' should be the adverb 'correctly'. Also remove extra 'I' and 'uh'. Suggestion: 'So if I want to write something correctly, I prefer handwriting.'

× Yes, I use laptop keyboard every day because now I'm prepare my eyes exam, I should protect every day and use keyboard to write a a paper.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because now I'm preparing for my eye exam; I need to protect my eyes and use the keyboard to write a paper.

Use present continuous 'I'm preparing' not 'I'm prepare'. Add articles 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and 'a paper'. 'Eyes exam' should be 'eye exam' and clarify 'protect my eyes'. Remove duplicate 'a'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because now I'm preparing for my eye exam; I need to protect my eyes and use the keyboard to write a paper.'

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Uh, seems and when I was primary students and first time we should study how to use computer, then I learn how to tap on a keyboard.

✓ When I was in primary school, the first time we studied computers, and I learned how to type on a keyboard.

'Primary students' should be 'primary school' (singular noun for the institution). Verb tenses: use past simple 'studied' and 'learned'. 'Tap on a keyboard' is replaced with 'type on a keyboard'. Suggestion: 'When I was in primary school, the first time we studied computers, and I learned how to type on a keyboard.'

× I use keyboards every day to protect my speed on typing because I should, uh, finish a paper in a limited time.

✓ I use the keyboard every day to maintain my typing speed because I have to finish a paper within a limited time.

Use definite article 'the keyboard' if referring to typing practice in general. 'Protect my speed' is incorrect collocation; use 'maintain my typing speed'. 'Should' is better as 'have to' for obligation here and 'in a limited time' becomes 'within a limited time'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: 'I use the keyboard every day to maintain my typing speed because I have to finish a paper within a limited time.'