Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use linking words like "because" and "also" properly. Correct collocations (e.g., "takes less time", "modern technology").

예시: I prefer typing because it usually takes less time and is more convenient. For example, I can edit and share documents quickly, and modern technology allows me to store everything on the cloud.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid hesitations and repetition. Give a specific reason and a short supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly, and correct prepositions (e.g., "stored on my laptop").

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I do most of my assignments on it. Since my files are stored on the laptop, it’s more convenient than using a desktop.

제안: Provide a clear time reference in a concise sentence, then add one specific detail about the experience. Remove repetitions and hesitations. Use past tense correctly and finish the thought instead of trailing off.

예시: I first learned to type in high school when my teacher showed us proper finger placement. It was memorable because we practiced every week and I improved quickly.

제안: Start with a direct statement of your method, then give one or two specific actions and a result. Avoid unnecessary words and grammatical errors. Use linking words like "by" or "because" for clarity.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing exercises and typing my class notes. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased over time.

× I do prefer typing because it gives me more less time to deliver my message as well as if it's more convenient nowadays since we have this more renovated technologies and like writing is much more difficult to do.

✓ I prefer typing because it gives me less time to deliver my message and it is more convenient nowadays since we have more advanced technology, whereas handwriting is more difficult.

The student misuses comparative adverbs and adjectives ('more less', 'more renovated technologies') and uses filler words ('like') that make the sentence unclear. Use 'less time' (not 'more less'), 'more convenient', and 'more advanced technology'. Replace 'writing' with 'handwriting' for clarity and use 'whereas' to contrast. Remove redundant phrases to make the sentence concise.

× Well, certainly most of the days I use laptop keyboard because, umm, mostly. I always do my assignments on my my school works. They are stored in on my laptop. So I use the laptop mostly.

✓ Well, on most days I use a laptop keyboard because I do my assignments on my laptop. My school work is stored on my laptop, so I use it mostly.

Errors include article and agreement issues: use 'on most days' not 'most of the days', 'a laptop keyboard' with an article, and 'school work' is uncountable singular. Remove redundant words and fix word order ('stored on my laptop'). This improves grammar and clarity.

× I my first time to learn how to type on a keyboard when my my teacher taught us how to use that when when when we were on my high school days. So it was memorable and.

✓ I first learned to type on a keyboard when my teacher taught us in high school, so it was memorable.

Use simple past 'learned' for a completed action. Remove extra words ('my my', repeated 'when', 'to learn' after 'first' should be 'first learned'). Use 'in high school' instead of 'on my high school days'. Combine into a concise past-tense sentence.

× It in order for me to improve my typing is to practice on a daily basis since I we always have the chance to use our gadgets or even our time to practice typing.

✓ To improve my typing, I practice daily because we always have the chance to use our devices and spare time to practice.

The original sentence has awkward word order and redundant pronouns ('I we'). Start with an infinitive phrase 'To improve my typing,' then use a clear subject and verb 'I practice daily'. Replace 'gadgets' with 'devices' and 'even our time' with 'spare time' for clarity. This corrects sentence structure and removes redundancy.