Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Use present simple and past for learning. Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. I type quickly because I use a text editor at work, so I practiced a lot during working hours. When I first started, my speed was slow, but regular practice helped me improve significantly.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, remove filler words, and give one concise supporting detail explaining why. Use correct article use and simple cohesion words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I usually type on a desktop computer at work because my company provides a desktop for all employees. As a result, I get more comfortable using a full-size keyboard for long tasks.

제안: Begin with a clear time reference, use past tense correctly, and explain briefly how skill developed afterward. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases; use linking words like 'but' and 'so' correctly.

예시: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. At first my technique was poor, but I kept practicing and gradually became faster and more accurate.

제안: State a clear method in one topic sentence, then give a specific example of practice and a result. Remove unclear words and use correct verb forms and connectors like 'by' and 'so'.

예시: I improve my typing by using the keyboard every day at work. For example, I focus on accuracy during emails and use short online exercises for ten minutes a day, so my speed has steadily increased.

× I prefer typing because I work hard on editor, so I when typing the speed is so fast because I practiced during working time at first I didn't first.

✓ I prefer typing because I work a lot with an editor, so when I type my speed is fast because I practiced during working hours; at first I wasn't good.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect word order, missing or wrong articles, tense inconsistency, and repeated words. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Suggestions: 1) Break the idea into clear clauses and reorder them logically. 2) Use correct articles ('an editor'). 3) Use consistent verb forms ('type' for general actions, 'wasn't good' for past ability). 4) Replace vague phrases with standard expressions ('working hours' instead of 'working time').

× I usually use type on desktop because I work at the company. They prepare, uh, route, uh, desktop for me. But I you.

✓ I usually type on a desktop because I work at a company. They provided a desktop for me.

Errors include wrong preposition and awkward phrasing. This fits 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (ID 11) and sentence structure. Suggestions: 1) Use 'type on a desktop' (on + device). 2) Use 'at a company' or 'for a company'; here 'at a company' is acceptable but 'for a company' could also work. 3) Use past simple 'provided' if the company gave the desktop. Remove filler words and incomplete clause.

× I learned how to type on keyboard when I was an elementary school student, but I it wasn't really good and I. What's not a good word to typing? So I practice.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in elementary school, but I wasn't very good at it then. I didn't know the right way to type, so I practiced.

Problems include incorrect tense and missing prepositions/objects. This fits 'Past tense issue' (ID 5). Suggestions: 1) Use 'learned' and 'wasn't' for past events. 2) Include 'on a keyboard' and 'in elementary school' for correct preposition usage. 3) Use 'wasn't very good at it' and 'didn't know the right way to type' for clarity. 4) Use past simple 'practiced' to show completed action.

× I used the keyboard every day, so I practiced to do typing during working time. So I practiced a rural with spend the time.

✓ I used the keyboard every day, so I practiced typing during working hours. I practiced regularly to spend time improving.

Errors include incorrect verb patterns and wrong word choice. This fits 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8). Suggestions: 1) Use 'practiced typing' (verb + -ing) rather than 'practiced to do typing'. 2) Replace 'working time' with 'working hours'. 3) 'A rural' is incorrect—use 'regularly' to mean frequently. 4) 'To spend time improving' clarifies purpose and uses correct infinitive structure.

× I usually use type on desktop because I work at the company. They prepare, uh, route, uh, desktop for me. But I you.

✓ I usually type on a desktop because I work at a company. They prepared a desktop for me.

Missing and incorrect articles cause confusion. This fits 'Article errors' (ID 22). Suggestions: 1) Use 'a desktop' when mentioning one non-specific desktop. 2) Use 'a company' unless referring to a specific company previously mentioned, in which case 'the company' would be correct. 3) Use consistent tense ('prepared' if the action already happened).