Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, thứ tự từ và phát âm; trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (ví dụ: "I prefer typing to handwriting."), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn 1–2 lý do bằng liên từ thích hợp (because, since, so) và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng thì và hình thức động từ đúng (I type, I prefer).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and faster for my school assignments. For instance, I can quickly edit and submit work online, so I use a keyboard almost every day.

제안: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp (desktop vs desktop computer), tránh lỗi từ như 'bring' và filler (uh, yes). Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp ("I usually type on a desktop computer.") rồi đưa lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so).

예시: I usually type on a desktop computer because it's always set up next to my study area. This makes it convenient to finish and post my assignments directly to the school's online platform.

제안: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp thời gian và cấu trúc (learned how to type; when I was in primary school). Sắp xếp ý mạch lạc: trả lời thời điểm, lý do học và kết quả. Tránh lặp và sửa các động từ (was bad at typing -> was slow at typing).

예시: I learned how to type when I was in primary school. At first I was slow and made many mistakes, so I practised every day; now I can type quite fast and accurately.

제안: Cần trả lời mạch lạc với các hoạt động cụ thể giúp cải thiện (practice drills, typing tests, lessons) và dùng ngôn ngữ tự nhiên. Tránh filler và dùng hình thức động từ chính xác (I open my computer, I practise typing). Nên đưa thêm ví dụ cụ thể về cách tập và tần suất.

예시: I improve my typing by practising daily — I open my computer and do online typing exercises or copy texts for 15–30 minutes. I also use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy over time.

× So are I love both but I love or typing more because it's it's very convenient and I have a lot of time on the online assignment at school and I usually typing every day.

✓ I love both, but I prefer typing because it's very convenient, I have many online assignments at school, and I usually type every day.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun structure 'So are I' and extra filler words. Replace with subject 'I' and appropriate verb forms. 'Prefer' is better than 'love or typing more'. 'A lot of time on the online assignment' is corrected to 'many online assignments' and 'I usually typing' requires the base verb 'type'. Suggestions: remove fillers, use 'prefer', use plural for countable nouns when appropriate, and use base verb after 'usually'.

× So every day I always type on desktop because it's always bring beside me. Yes and especially it's very convenient when I uh, post my assignment on the online page of my school yes.

✓ Every day I always type on a desktop because it is always beside me. It is especially convenient when I post my assignments on my school's online page.

'Desktop' as a singular noun referring to a specific device needs an article 'a desktop' or 'the desktop'. 'Bring beside me' is incorrect; use 'beside me' with a linking verb 'is'. Use plural 'assignments' for repeated tasks. 'The online page of my school' is more natural as 'my school's online page'. Suggestions: include correct articles before countable singular nouns, use correct verb 'is', and use possessive form for ownership.

× So I learned type on keyboard when I just in the primary school, Yes, because at that time I was very bad when I'm typing the text. So I need to exercise every day and now I can type very fast.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school because at that time I was very bad at typing. So I needed to practice every day, and now I can type very fast.

After 'learned' we need the infinitive 'to type'. Use past tense consistently: 'when I was in primary school' and 'I was very bad at typing'. 'Bad at' is the correct preposition. 'Need' should be past 'needed' to match the time frame. 'Exercise' in this context is better as 'practice'. Suggestions: use infinitive after 'learned', use correct prepositions, and keep past-tense verbs consistent when describing past events.

× So I type every day, especially when I have the time. I always, uh, make uh, open my computer and type the text to improve my typing well.

✓ I type every day, especially when I have time. I usually open my computer and type to improve my typing.

Remove unnecessary filler words. 'Make open' is incorrect; simply 'open' is sufficient. 'Type the text' is unnatural; use 'type' or 'type texts'. 'To improve my typing well' should be 'to improve my typing' or 'to improve my typing skills'. Suggestions: avoid redundant verbs, use base verb 'open' and gerund/object 'typing' correctly.