Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct small grammar issues, and add a specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., because, so, for example). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember and recall information better. For example, when I prepare for final exams I handwrite notes and draw diagrams, which makes it easier to review and retain key concepts.

제안: Be more precise and avoid redundant phrases. Use a concise main sentence, then give a short specific reason and an example. Correct collocations ('faster than handwriting', 'every day' as two words).

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because it is faster than handwriting. For instance, I use it in language school to take notes quickly and keep organized lecture materials.

제안: Provide a direct time answer first, then a brief reason and a concise description of how you learned. Fix small wording issues ('learn how to type on a keyboard', 'exactly' unnecessary).

예시: I learned how to type on a keyboard last year because my language academy required a certain typing speed and accuracy. To meet the requirement I practiced daily using online typing exercises and drills.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear sequence: methods used and results. Correct grammar and awkward phrases, use linking words (firstly, then, finally), and give specific practice techniques and time frames. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by focusing on accuracy first and then increasing speed. Firstly, I practise daily with accuracy drills and typing tests; then I use timed lessons to build speed, and finally I track progress with online metrics to ensure steady improvement.

× I prefer handwriting because handwriting helps me remember and recall concepts and times more easily.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember and recall concepts and details more easily.

The sentence repeats 'handwriting' unnecessarily and uses 'times' awkwardly. This is a quantifier/word choice issue: 'times' is vague; 'details' is more natural. Also replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use pronouns to avoid repetition and choose precise nouns.

× So when I'm preparing my final Test, I usually write notes by hand and also write some diagram.

✓ So when I'm preparing for my final test, I usually write notes by hand and also draw some diagrams.

Multiple article and word-choice issues: 'final Test' should be 'final test' and needs the preposition 'for' (preposition error but main is article/usage). 'write some diagram' is incorrect collocation: you 'draw' diagrams and usually plural 'diagrams'. Suggestion: use 'prepare for' with lower-case 'test' and use correct verb 'draw' and pluralize 'diagram' when unspecified quantity.

× Yes, nowadays I usually type on my laptop everyday because typing is very fast rather than handwriting.

✓ Yes, nowadays I usually type on my laptop every day because typing is much faster than handwriting.

Two issues: 'everyday' is an adjective; the adverbial phrase should be 'every day'. 'very fast rather than handwriting' is incorrect comparison: use 'much faster than handwriting'. Suggestion: separate 'every day' and use 'faster than' for comparisons.

× So when I attend a language school, I usually type on my laptop to follow the class and remember concepts.

✓ So when I attend language school, I usually type on my laptop to follow the class and remember concepts.

The phrase 'attend a language school' is possible but more natural is 'attend language school' depending on variety; this is a minor preposition/article choice. Keeping 'attend language school' or 'attend a language school' both acceptable; here suggestion removed 'a' for naturalness. No tense change required.

× I'd say last year I learned how to type keyboard exactly because the Language Academy required typing speed and accuracy, so I had to practice every single day.

✓ I'd say last year I learned how to type on a keyboard because the Language Academy required typing speed and accuracy, so I had to practice every single day.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'type' and awkward adverb 'exactly' is unnecessary. 'Type keyboard' is ungrammatical; use 'type on a keyboard'. Tense 'learned' fits past context. Suggestion: include correct preposition and remove filler adverbs.

× Firstly I focused on accuracy because the main advantage of typing is speed, so I had to make perfect of my typing accuracy and then I care about my typing speed so I had to practice every.

✓ First, I focused on accuracy because the main advantage of typing is speed, so I had to perfect my typing accuracy, and then I worked on increasing my typing speed by practicing every day.

Multiple issues: sequence of tenses and incorrect expressions. 'Firstly' to 'First' is stylistic. 'make perfect of my typing accuracy' is ungrammatical; use 'perfect my typing accuracy'. 'I care about my typing speed' mixes present with past narrative; use past 'I worked on' to match earlier 'focused' and 'had to'. 'practice every' is incomplete; use 'practice every day'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for actions completed in the past and use correct collocations like 'perfect' and 'practice every day'.