Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Also correct small wording issues (e.g., “on the phone or on the computer” → “on my phone or computer”).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it lets me write much faster. For example, when I’m composing emails or notes on my laptop, I can edit and organize my ideas quickly, which is more efficient than writing by hand.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, reduce repetition, and use linking words to add brief supporting detail (e.g., because/so). Remove filler words. Mention a specific task to make the answer concrete.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my work requires me to use a portable computer. For instance, I write reports and emails on my laptop, so it’s more convenient than using a desktop.

제안: Correct tense and phrasing, be precise and concise. Start with a clear time reference, then add one specific detail about the lessons. Remove hesitations and unnatural expressions like “I want to type”.

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten, during computer class at school. My teacher showed us touch-typing basics so we could type emails and assignments more easily.

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct: state how you improve typing (practice, apps, lessons). If mentioning an app, give its name or describe activities and duration. Use linking words (for example, by/so) and avoid vague phrasing.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing with typing apps and regular exercises. For example, I used a typing app for about two months to practice accuracy and speed, doing daily 15-minute lessons.

× I would say I prefer typing because I can express my feelings faster and handwriting, uh, it's a long process, so I would prefer typing in the phone or in the computer, but I would prefer computer.

✓ I would say I prefer typing because I can express my thoughts faster; handwriting is a long process, so I prefer typing on my phone or on my computer, and I prefer the computer.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'handwriting, uh, it's a long process' repeats subject and uses informal filler; use 'handwriting is a long process' for clarity and correct agreement. 'Express my feelings faster' is acceptable but 'thoughts' is more natural for typing; 'in the phone' and 'in the computer' use incorrect prepositions—use 'on my phone/on my computer'. Also streamline repeated 'I would prefer' to avoid redundancy. Suggestions: remove fillers, make subjects and verbs agree, use correct prepositions ('on'), and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I always type on a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient for me due to my work and I am every day on the computer. So uh, I would prefer typing on a laptop keyboard.

✓ I always type on a laptop keyboard because it is more convenient for my work and I use the computer every day. So I prefer typing on a laptop keyboard.

Incorrect word order and awkward present-tense phrasing: 'I am every day on the computer' is ungrammatical. Use 'I use the computer every day' or 'I am on the computer every day' for correct present tense and word order. Also 'it's' expanded to 'it is' for formality; remove filler 'uh' and change 'would prefer' to 'prefer' to match habitual present tense. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense, place adverbial expressions ('every day') after the verb or at sentence end, and avoid unnecessary modal 'would' for habitual actions.

× I want to type when I was about 10 years old.

✓ I learned to type when I was about 10 years old.

Wrong verb tense and verb choice: 'I want to type' uses present tense and wrong meaning. The past action requires simple past 'learned' or 'started learning'. Use 'learned to type' to express acquisition of the skill. Suggestions: use past tense verbs for past events ('learned', 'started') and use 'learned to' + verb for skills acquired.

× It was at school in the computer class and my teacher taught me how to type on the computer, uh, to uh, do my future e-mail.

✓ It was at school in computer class, and my teacher taught me how to type on the computer so I could write emails in the future.

Preposition and phrasing errors: 'in the computer class' is acceptable but 'in computer class' or 'in the computer class' both okay; main issues: 'to uh, do my future e-mail' is ungrammatical and unidiomatic. Use 'so I could write emails in the future' or 'to write emails later.' Also remove fillers 'uh'. Suggestions: use 'write emails' not 'do e-mail', use 'so I could' or 'to' plus a base verb for purpose, and avoid fillers.

× If you speak about computer typing, I don't know that special apps which helps to improve my typing and I was in this app about two months.

✓ If you mean computer typing, I do not know any special apps that help improve typing, but I used one app for about two months.

Multiple errors: 'speak about' should be 'mean' or 'are talking about'; 'I don't know that special apps which helps' mixes singular/plural and uses wrong relative pronoun—use 'any special apps that help' (plural agreement: 'apps' + 'help'). 'I was in this app about two months' is wrong; use 'I used one app for about two months.' Also replace contraction and remove awkward phrasing. Suggestions: use 'mean' for referring, use 'any' for indefinite plural, match verb agreement ('apps that help'), and use 'use/used' for interacting with apps rather than 'be in'.