Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct linking words and avoid repetition. Focus on accuracy (articles, pronouns) and fluency (smooth connectors).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and share files with my friends or family via email.

제안: Combine sentences to avoid repetition and improve naturalness. Use accurate word forms (e.g., 'laptop keyboard') and a concise link phrase to support the main idea. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I do most of my assignments and work on my laptop. It’s more convenient and quicker for me than using a desktop.

제안: Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., 'learned to type'). Give a clear time reference and one brief detail about how you learned. Use linking words if adding detail.

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My teacher showed us the basic finger positions and we practiced typing exercises to increase our speed.

제안: State the main method clearly and add one concrete practice example. Correct word forms (e.g., 'by typing regularly') and explain the result briefly and coherently.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly—mostly by doing homework and timed typing exercises online. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased and I make fewer editing mistakes.

× I definitely prefer typing, this is because it's more convenient and faster compared to handwriting and also I can share my results by my friends or my or my family if I type by using computer so it's more convenient and easy to edit my.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster than handwriting, and I can share my work with my friends or my family if I type on a computer, so it's easier to edit.

Pronoun and preposition misuse: 'share my results by my friends or my family' is incorrect; the correct construction is 'share my work with my friends or my family.' Also 'by using computer' should be 'on a computer.' Combine clauses with appropriate conjunctions and remove redundancy ('my or my'). Use 'easier' rather than 'more convenient and easy' to avoid awkward repetition. Suggestions: use 'share ... with' for people, use 'on a computer' for device, and avoid repeating words.

× Regularly I use laptop key keyboard for typing.

✓ I regularly use my laptop keyboard for typing.

Word order and article omission: Adverb 'regularly' is better before the verb; 'laptop key keyboard' is incorrect word choice — use 'laptop keyboard.' Add the possessive 'my' to indicate ownership. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions and use correct noun phrases.

× This is because I do my assignments or my work by using my laptop and so I usually use laptop keyboard.

✓ This is because I do my assignments and my work on my laptop, so I usually use the laptop keyboard.

Preposition and article errors with pronouns: use 'on my laptop' (not 'by using my laptop') and include 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' to refer to the specific keyboard. Also 'assignments or my work' is repetitive; use 'and' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: prefer 'on' for devices and include articles when referring to specific items.

× It's more convenient and faster for me.

✓ It's more convenient and faster for me.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; however, to improve style, combine adjectives properly: 'It's more convenient and faster for me' is fine, or better 'It's more convenient and faster.' No correction required. Suggestion: you can also say 'It's more convenient and faster for me to type.'

× Actually, I learned how to typing on a on a keyboard when I was a primary school student.

✓ Actually, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school student.

After 'learned how to' use the base form 'type' not the gerund 'typing.' Also remove duplicate 'on a' and use 'a keyboard.' Suggestion: use 'learned how to' + base verb.

× It is time I, uh, my teacher, la uh, taught me a lot about how to type and how to improve my, uh, speed on a on the laptop keyboard.

✓ At that time, my teacher taught me a lot about how to type and how to improve my speed on the laptop keyboard.

Tense and phrase clarity: 'It is time I' is incorrect for past reference; use 'At that time' or 'Then.' Remove filler words and duplicate 'on a on the.' Use 'the laptop keyboard' if referring to a specific keyboard. Suggestion: use clear time expressions for past events and avoid fillers.

× Uh, I improve my typing by type regularly because I do my homework or my work by using computer keyboards.

✓ I improve my typing by typing regularly because I do my homework and my work using a computer keyboard.

Structure and verb form: 'improve ... by type' should be 'improve ... by typing' (use gerund after 'by'). Use 'using a computer keyboard' or 'on a computer' and avoid 'by using computer keyboards.' Also 'homework and my work' is clearer than 'homework or my work.' Suggestion: after 'by' use verb+ing; use articles with 'computer keyboard.'

× As a result, uh, I can improve my speed and also my accuracy on edit.

✓ As a result, I can improve my speed and also my accuracy in editing.

Preposition and noun form: 'accuracy on edit' is incorrect; use 'accuracy in editing' or 'accuracy when editing.' Remove filler 'uh.' Suggestion: use 'in' with noun '-ing' forms to indicate skill in an activity.