Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ нужно делать более естественным и связным: начните с чётного утверждения, затем приведите конкретную причину и пример. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «I can typing» → «I can type») и лишних повторов («when I write an essay» повторяется). Старайтесь не превышать 5 предложений и используйте связки: because, so, for example.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster. For example, when I write essays for university I finish them more quickly on a laptop, so I have time to edit and improve my ideas.

제안: Ответ следует упростить и сделать грамматически правильным. Начните с прямого утверждения (desktop or laptop), уточните место использования (at work or at home) и приведите краткую причину. Устраняйте неверный порядок слов и формы (например, «I don't have any desktop and the laptop» → «I don't have a desktop or a laptop at home»). Используйте связки: however, so, at work.

예시: I don't have a desktop or laptop at home, but I use a desktop computer at work. So I type emails and reports there every day to communicate with colleagues.

제안: Ответ должен быть короче и содержать конкретную временную рамку и краткое объяснение. Избегайте тавтологии («in school», «at school time») и незавершённых фраз. Используйте связки: when, so, then. Уточните, как часто вы практиковали, чтобы дать конкретику.

예시: I learned to type when I was at school, during regular computer lessons. The teacher showed us proper finger placement, and we practiced weekly, so my speed improved over time.

제안: Сделайте ответ более структурированным: начните с основной идеи, затем перечислите методы улучшения (emails, practice, online exercises) и завершите результатом. Избегайте заполнителей («uh, umm») и незавершённых мыслей. Используйте связки: for example, by, so that.

예시: I improve my typing mainly at work by writing emails to colleagues every day. I also practice with online typing exercises and by typing longer documents, so my speed and accuracy get better.

× I prefer typing to handwrite because I can typing much faster than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster than when I write by hand.

The phrase 'prefer X to Y' requires parallel forms: 'typing' and 'handwriting' or 'typing' and 'writing by hand'. 'Can typing' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' must be followed by the base form 'type'. Use 'write by hand' or 'handwriting' for clarity. Suggestions: use parallel gerunds or parallel noun forms and use base verb after modal verbs.

× For example in the essay when I write an essay, I can write faster on the laptop or computer and.

✓ For example, when I write an essay, I can write faster on a laptop or computer.

The sentence is redundant and unfinished. Remove repeated phrases ('in the essay when I write an essay') and the trailing 'and'. Add an article 'a' before 'laptop'. Suggestions: avoid repetition and ensure sentences are complete.

× To be honest I don't have any desktop and the laptop but I have desktop on my work on my job.

✓ To be honest, I don't have a desktop or a laptop at home, but I have a desktop at work.

Use articles 'a' with singular countable nouns ('a desktop', 'a laptop'). Use 'or' not 'and' when negating possession of either item. 'On my work on my job' is incorrect prepositional use; use 'at work'. Suggestions: include articles for singular countable nouns and use correct prepositions for location.

× So every on my job I can typing emails and they communicate other.

✓ So at work I can type emails and communicate with others.

After modal verb 'can' use base form 'type', not 'typing'. Preposition 'on my job' should be 'at work'. 'They communicate other' is incorrect: use 'communicate with others'. Suggestions: use base verb after modals and correct prepositions; 'communicate with' + object.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at school time and in the school we had computer lessons in which the teacher taught us typing skills and over time we practiced it and we.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at school. We had computer lessons in which the teacher taught us typing skills, and over time we practiced them.

Use simple past consistently ('learned', 'had', 'taught', 'practiced'). Remove 'school time' (unnatural) and finish the sentence; 'typing skills' is plural so refer to 'them'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent and complete the sentence; use plural pronoun to match plural noun.

× At work, I improve my typing skills. I often write emails to my colleagues and uh, so I practice typing every day.

✓ At work, I improve my typing skills. I often write emails to my colleagues, so I practice typing every day.

This is mainly punctuation and filler words; preserve present simple for habitual actions. Remove fillers 'uh' and ensure clause connection with comma. Suggestions: avoid filler words and use commas to join related clauses.

× Uh, which type? Umm, big, uh, essays. And uh, it was.

✓ I also type longer documents, such as essays.

The original is fragmented and contains fillers ('uh', 'umm') and incomplete thoughts. Combine into a full sentence that conveys the intended meaning. Suggestions: remove fillers and form complete sentences that clearly state the idea.