Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は主張があり意図は伝わりますが、いくつかの問題があります。まず語彙や文法の誤り（"hand lighting"など）と繰り返し（"I I"）があります。文は断片的で論理のつながりが弱く、具体例や理由が乏しいため説得力に欠けます。改善方法としては：1) 語彙を正確に使う（handwriting = 手書き、store = 保存）2) 1文目で明確に主張し、2〜3文で具体的な理由と例を述べる（接続詞を使う）3) 発音や流暢さを鍛えるため短い練習フレーズを繰り返す。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can store and organize my notes digitally. For example, I save my documents on the cloud, so I rarely lose important files. In addition, typing is faster for me, which helps when I need to take notes quickly.

제안: 意図は伝わりますが、文法と流暢さの問題が目立ちます（時制の混乱、不要な繰り返し、口語的すぎる表現）。改善点は：1) 明確な主節で始める（I use a laptop.）2) 過去・現在の時制を整理する（"when I became"→"when I became an adult"または"since I was a child"）3) 繋ぎ言葉を使って理由や習慣を説明する（"so", "because"）。

예시: I use a laptop every day for typing. Since I started using computers regularly as a student, I have practiced typing a lot. As a result, I feel comfortable typing on a laptop keyboard.

제안: 答えは概ね適切で、学んだ時期と理由を示していますが、表現が不自然で繰り返しがあります。改善点：1) 年代や時期を明確に述べる（"when I was in junior high school"）2) 文を整理して一貫性ある流れにする（主張→理由→具体例）3) 不要な語の重複を避ける。

예시: I learned to type when I was in junior high school because we had computer classes and a dedicated computer room. During those lessons, we practiced typing regularly, which helped me build my skills.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが混乱した表現と語彙の誤用が多く、意味が取りにくい部分があります（アプリ名や説明が曖昧）。改善策：1) アプリ名や使い方を正確に述べる（例："typing app"、具体名があれば明記）2) 理由や頻度を加えて詳細にする（"I practice daily for 20 minutes"）3) 接続詞で文をつなぎ、1〜3文で完結に述べる。

예시: I improve my typing by using typing apps on my computer, such as a practice program that drills common words and phrases. I usually practice for about 15 minutes every day, which has helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because when I use hand lighting I have to use paper right? And I I cannot store the everything of me and I lost everything so I.

✓ I prefer typing because when I write by hand I have to use paper, right? I cannot store everything about myself, and I might lose it all.

Student used incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing: 'hand lighting' is incorrect for 'writing by hand'; 'the everything of me' is ungrammatical. Use 'write by hand' and 'everything about myself' or 'all my notes/documents'. Also use modal 'might' to indicate possibility of losing things. Improve by practicing standard collocations (write by hand, lose everything).

× I use laptop.

✓ I use a laptop.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun. In English, singular countable nouns normally require an article. Add 'a'.

× I use laptop keyboard every day and when when I became I when I become a adult I have to use a computer to like type on the keyboard.

✓ I use the laptop keyboard every day, and when I become an adult I will have to use a computer to type on the keyboard, so I practice now.

Several errors: missing 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' for a specific keyboard; tense and word order mistakes ('became' vs 'become'); missing article 'an' before 'adult' and incorrect modal/tense for future activity—use 'will have to'. Also remove filler 'like' and duplicate words. Use consistent tense and clear structure.

× I learned when I was a child like junior high school student because I started to learn on in the computer class and we have also like computer room.

✓ I learned when I was a child, when I was a junior high school student, because I started to learn in computer class and we also had a computer room.

Tense inconsistency and preposition errors: 'started to learn on in the computer class' should be 'started to learn in computer class'. Use past tense 'had' for 'we also had a computer room' to match 'learned'. Repeat of 'was' clarifies meaning. Remove filler 'like'.

× So at at there I study.

✓ So I studied there.

Incorrect preposition and tense: 'at at there' is redundant and awkward; use 'there' and past tense 'studied' to match earlier past-time context.

× I I improve my typing on the computer apps like we have a Sushida and it is a app to type on the name of the sushi and it is so usual for me.

✓ I improve my typing with computer apps. For example, we have an app called Sushida that helps you practice typing the names of sushi, and it is very useful for me.

Multiple issues: use 'with' for tools ('improve with apps'), article errors ('an app'), incorrect phrase 'type on the name of the sushi' should be 'type the names of sushi' or 'type the names of sushi items'. 'Usual' is wrong; use 'useful'. Also remove repetition and filler 'I I'.