Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar mistakes (e.g. "use it to typing" -> "use typing").

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. Since I came here three years ago I’ve used English mostly on computers at school, so I’m more comfortable typing, especially for essays and notes.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and complete the reason with a clear linking phrase. Fix incomplete sentence endings and minor grammar (e.g. "laptop keyboard that's" -> "because I only have a laptop").

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard. I don’t have a desktop, so I use my laptop for all my typing tasks, both for study and messaging.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear timeline: give one sentence stating when you learned to type in Japanese and another for English, using linking words like "but" or "then". Avoid filler words and be specific about times.

예시: I first learned to type in Japanese when I was in primary school. Later, about three years ago when I moved here, I learned to type in English and have been practicing since then.

제안: Provide a clearer stance and give specific methods even if you think practice isn’t necessary. Use linking words (e.g. "however", "so") and avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "type the typing." Suggest at least one way you could improve to show reflection.

예시: I don’t practice formal typing drills because I feel comfortable with my speed. However, I could improve further by using online typing exercises for accuracy or by typing longer essays to increase my speed and reduce mistakes.

× I prefer typing in English, especially in English 'cause I started learning English since I came here and I use it to typing at school more than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing in English, especially because I started learning English after I came here and I use it for typing at school more than handwriting.

Error type 8 (Verb + -ing form): 'use it to typing' is incorrect: after 'use it for' a gerund or noun is required, so 'use it for typing' is correct. Also 'cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Since I came here' with 'started learning' should use 'after' or rephrase to 'I started learning English after I came here' to show sequence clearly.

× I prefer typing in English, especially in English 'cause I started learning English since I came here and I use it to typing at school more than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing in English, especially because I started learning English after I came here and I use it for typing at school more than handwriting.

Error type 22 (Article errors): Missing article before 'handwriting' is acceptable as an uncountable noun, but clearer phrasing uses no article. Main correction focuses on preposition and verb form; ensure articles are used correctly when needed (e.g., 'the laptop keyboard').

× Umm. I type on laptop keyboard more often than desktop keyboard because I only have laptop keyboard that's.

✓ Umm. I type on a laptop keyboard more often than on a desktop keyboard because I only have a laptop.

Error type 1 (Singular and plural issue): Missing articles before countable nouns 'laptop keyboard' and 'desktop keyboard'. Use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop keyboard'. Also 'that's' at the end is incomplete; simplify to 'I only have a laptop.'

× Umm, I learned how to type on keyboard in Japanese words when I was in primary school, but I learned how to type in English since I came here, so which is 3 years ago, umm.

✓ Umm, I learned how to type on a keyboard using Japanese input when I was in primary school, but I learned how to type in English after I came here, which was three years ago.

Error type 9 (Verb in the past participle form): 'which is 3 years ago' is incorrect tense and structure. Use past tense 'which was three years ago'. Also add articles 'a keyboard' and rephrase 'in Japanese words' to 'using Japanese input' for clarity.

× Umm, I'm not doing specifically practice or improve improving my typing because I don't think I have to practice for typing.

✓ Umm, I'm not specifically practicing or improving my typing because I don't think I need to practice typing.

Error type 6 (Present tense issue): 'I'm not doing specifically practice' is ungrammatical. Use the present continuous with gerund: 'I'm not specifically practicing'. 'Improve improving' is redundant; use one verb. 'have to practice for typing' is unnatural; use 'need to practice typing.'

× Umm, I learned how to type on keyboard in Japanese words when I was in primary school, but I learned how to type in English since I came here, so which is 3 years ago, umm.

✓ Umm, I learned how to type on a keyboard using Japanese input when I was in primary school, but I learned how to type in English after I came here, which was three years ago.

Error type 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions): 'on keyboard in Japanese words' is incorrect preposition use. Use 'on a keyboard' and 'using Japanese input' or 'for Japanese' instead. Also 'since I came here' should be 'after I came here' when followed by a specific past time 'three years ago.'

× So I go use.

✓ So I use it more.

Error type 2 (Third person singular issue): The original fragment 'So I go use.' is ungrammatical and likely intended to mean 'So I use it more.' Use simple present 'I use' for habitual action. Ensure complete sentence structure.

× Umm. I type on laptop keyboard more often than desktop keyboard because I only have laptop keyboard that's.

✓ Umm. I type on a laptop keyboard more often than on a desktop keyboard because I only have a laptop.

Error type 26 (Sentence structure errors): The original sentence lacks parallel prepositions ('on') and articles, and ends with an incomplete clause 'that's.' Rephrase to provide parallel structure and a complete main clause.

× ..., so which is 3 years ago, umm.

✓ ..., which was three years ago.

Error type 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers): '3' should be written as 'three' in formal speech and the clause should be 'which was three years ago.' The original structure 'so which is' is incorrect; use 'which was' to refer to a past time.