Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng còn lặp từ, lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc. Nên tránh dùng cụm từ thừa (“as a homework form”), sửa ngữ pháp so sánh (“more easily than handwriting”) và rút gọn ý để tự nhiên hơn. Thêm một lý do cụ thể hoặc một ví dụ ngắn để làm câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient and faster. For instance, when I write essays for school I can edit and rearrange sentences quickly on a computer, which saves me time and reduces mistakes.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp lại ý và có nhiều tiếng ngắt (fillers) như “uh”, “like”. Cần dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp (need -> needs, avoid “so that I use”) và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể về cách laptop giúp học tập để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because I study and take notes digitally. Using a laptop allows me to organize files, search information quickly, and review notes more efficiently than handwritten notebooks.

제안: Câu trả lời có thông tin tốt nhưng diễn đạt luẩn quẩn, lặp và có nhiều tiếng ngắt. Nên dùng thì đúng (learned vs have learned), sắp xếp ý theo trình tự thời gian và nêu tên hoặc loại trang web để cụ thể hơn.

예시: I learned to type in primary school during the COVID-19 pandemic when classes moved online. I practiced on typing websites and gradually improved my speed and accuracy.

제안: Ý rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu rối và mâu thuẫn (nói đã học nhưng không cố gắng cải thiện). Tránh lặp và fillers, sửa ngữ pháp và giải thích cụ thể các hoạt động bạn làm để cải thiện (bài tập, luyện tốc độ, sử dụng phần mềm).

예시: I improved my typing by practicing touch-typing on online platforms like TypingClub, doing daily drills to increase speed, and timing myself with speed tests to track progress.

× I would definitely choose typing because I can fix my mistake easily than handwriting.

✓ I would definitely choose typing because I can fix my mistakes more easily than with handwriting.

Incorrect use of comparative with adverb and missing preposition: 'easily than' should be 'more easily than' to form a correct comparison; 'my mistake' should be plural 'my mistakes' for general reference; include 'with' before 'handwriting' for clarity.

× I need to type on my laptop keyboard on a daily basis because I'm the kind of person that always need laptop for my studying.

✓ I need to type on my laptop keyboard on a daily basis because I'm the kind of person who always needs a laptop for my studying.

Relative pronoun and subject-verb agreement: use 'who' for people instead of 'that'; 'need' must be 'needs' to agree with singular subject 'person'; include article 'a' before 'laptop'.

× Like I quite, uh, I'm not really into uh, handwriting because it's not as convenient as typing.

✓ I am not really into handwriting because it is not as convenient as typing.

Fillers and fragmented structure: remove 'Like I quite, uh' which creates an incomplete clause; expand contractions for clarity; ensure a single clear sentence.

× So that I use laptop keyboard every day to enhance my studying skills.

✓ So I use my laptop keyboard every day to improve my study skills.

Incorrect connector and word choice: 'So that I use' is awkward — use 'So I use'; include possessive 'my'; 'enhance my studying skills' is better as 'improve my study skills'.

× I have learned how to type on the keyboard since I was in primary school because at that time I needed to study online because of the COVID-19 pandemic.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school because at that time I needed to study online due to the COVID-19 pandemic.

Tense mismatch: 'have learned ... since I was' with a finished past time reference is incorrect — use simple past 'learned' with 'when I was'; also prefer 'due to' over repeated 'because'.

× So I try to, uh, learn, I try to learn, uh, typing skills on some websites to, uh, study online well.

✓ So I tried to learn typing skills on some websites to study online effectively.

Tense and adverb choice: context is past, so use 'tried' not 'try'; remove fillers; use 'effectively' instead of 'well' for adverbial clarity.

× Well, I enhance my typing skill by learning touch typing on some online websites.

✓ Well, I improved my typing skills by learning touch typing on some online websites.

Tense and number: if referring to past improvement, use past 'improved'; 'typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'; 'on some online websites' is acceptable but 'through online websites' could be smoother.

× However, because I had to learn touch typing since I was in my primary school so that I don't put much effort in learning UH in enhancing my typing skill.

✓ However, because I had to learn touch typing when I was in primary school, I did not have to put much effort into improving my typing skills.

Multiple issues: 'since' with past perfect is awkward—use 'when I was'; remove filler 'UH'; combine clauses properly and use past tense consistency: 'had to' then 'did not have to'; use 'into improving' and plural 'skills'.