Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and varied in vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition of phrases like “definitely” and refine grammar (e.g. “typing accommodates for that” → “typing helps with that”).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it helps me avoid spelling and grammar mistakes. Moreover, typing is much faster for me, which is useful during timed tasks. For example, when I write essays for school, typing lets me edit quickly and keeps my work neat.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then two concise supporting details linked logically. Correct small grammatical errors (e.g. “classes that requires” → “classes that require”). Reduce repetition of “every single”.

예시: I use a laptop most days because it’s portable and fits my student lifestyle. Occasionally I use a desktop in computer labs when a class requires specific software. As a result, my laptop is the device I carry to every lesson.

제안: Move from hesitant language to a direct answer, then add concise supporting details. Fix grammar and make details specific (e.g. “in 4th grade” and describe activities precisely).

예시: I learned to type in the fourth grade during weekly computer lessons. We practiced touch-typing exercises, memorized proper hand placement, and completed timed drills to build speed and accuracy.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and combine short sentences using linking words to avoid choppiness. Be specific about how the practice helps (e.g. timed drills, accuracy feedback).

예시: I improve my typing by using a website called Typeblit, where I transcribe real books. This practice builds my accuracy and speed because I get continuous typing practice and I can compare my text to the original to spot mistakes.

× I'd say I definitely use a laptop more than desktops, but occasionally I will have different classes that requires me to use the desktop in the classroom.

✓ I'd say I definitely use a laptop more than desktops, but occasionally I will have different classes that require me to use the desktop in the classroom.

Subject 'different classes' is plural so the verb should be 'require' (plural), not 'requires' (singular). Use subject-verb agreement: plural subjects take base verb without 's'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs, e.g., 'classes require'.

× typing just accommodate for that.

✓ typing just accommodates that.

The subject 'typing' is a singular gerund, so it takes the third person singular verb form 'accommodates'. Also 'accommodate for' is incorrect; use 'accommodate' or 'account for'. Suggestion: use 'accommodates' or rephrase 'typing helps with that'.

× Also because I'm a really slow writer so typing definitely helps with the speed and overall unity of my writing.

✓ Also, because I'm a really slow writer, typing definitely helps with the speed and overall unity of my writing.

This sentence needs commas for clarity and to join clauses correctly; it's punctuation rather than adjective/adverb error, but the structure 'Also because ... so ...' is redundant. Remove 'so' or restructure. Suggestion: use either 'Also, because... , typing...' or '... so typing ...', not both.

× I'd say around in probably 4th grade because of my old school we had computer lessons where you have to learn how to type certain words and memorize the hand placement on the keyboard and just a lot of typing practice over and over again.

✓ I'd say probably around 4th grade because at my old school we had computer lessons where we had to learn how to type certain words, memorize hand placement on the keyboard, and do a lot of typing practice repeatedly.

Tense and person inconsistency: speaker mixes past ('we had') with present ('you have to learn'). Maintain past tense for past events: 'we had to learn'. Also 'around in probably' is redundant; use 'probably around'. Suggestion: keep past tense and consistent subject ('we').

× I usually go on this website called Typeblit to type out actual books.

✓ I usually go on this website called Typeblit to type out actual books.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. 'to type' is correct infinitive form following 'go on website to ...'. No error found according to the provided list.

× So I'm improving my reading while also improving my typing speed and also my typing accuracy by doing that.

✓ So I improve my reading while also improving my typing speed and my typing accuracy by doing that.

Consistency of present tense: in general present continuous 'I'm improving' is acceptable if ongoing. However, to match habitual action 'by doing that' simple present 'I improve' may be clearer. Either is acceptable; no strict grammatical error. Suggestion: choose one form for consistency, e.g., 'I improve' for habitual actions.