Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. I prefer handwriting for personal notes but typing for work), then give one specific reason for each preference using linking words (for example, because/since). Avoid repetition and correct article/capitalization errors.

예시: I prefer handwriting for personal things but typing for work. For example, I keep a diary by hand because it feels more personal and helps me remember details, whereas I type at work because it is faster and makes editing easier.

제안: Provide a direct clear answer first (e.g. I usually use a desktop at work). Use linking words to contrast (however / although) and correct grammar errors (e.g. unnecessary words, verb forms). Give one specific example of when you use the laptop.

예시: I usually type on a desktop at work because my job requires a full-time workstation. However, I use my laptop at home or for school when I need to study or work remotely.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time reference (e.g. I learned in high school). Use past tense consistently and avoid filler phrases. Add one brief supporting detail about the course or how long it lasted.

예시: I learned to type in high school when we had a computer class. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practiced with exercises for about a semester.

제안: Begin with a direct statement (e.g. I improve my typing by practicing daily). Be specific about methods and tools, use linking words (for example/for instance), and correct grammar. Mention a specific website or practice routine for credibility.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I use an online trainer like TypingClub to do 15-minute exercises and check my words-per-minute score to track progress.

× I love handwriting whenever I'm writing at my Diaries on what happened on my specific days, and I love typing when I'm at work doing my task.

✓ I love handwriting whenever I'm writing in my diary about what happened on particular days, and I love typing when I'm at work doing my tasks.

Use 'in' with 'diary' not 'at my Diaries'; 'diary' is singular and common noun so lowercase; 'about' is the correct preposition for topics; 'specific days' is better as 'particular days'; 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match general meaning.

× I type on desktop because it requires on my daily pass at my work. I do have laptop but I I'm using that whenever I am home or using it for my school.

✓ I type on a desktop because it is required for my daily work tasks. I do have a laptop, and I use it whenever I am at home or for my school work.

Use the article 'a' with 'desktop' and 'laptop'; 'requires on my daily pass' is incorrect — 'is required for my daily work tasks' expresses purpose; remove duplicate 'I'm'; use 'at home' not 'home' alone; 'for my school' should be 'for my school work'.

× From what I have remembered, the very first time I use keyboard is when I was in high school.

✓ From what I remember, the very first time I used a keyboard was when I was in high school.

'From what I have remembered' is unnatural; use simple present 'I remember'. The event is in the past so use past tense 'used' and include the article 'a' before 'keyboard'.

× There is a subject that teach us how to use a keyboard and then that's that's what I have learned.

✓ There was a subject that taught us how to use a keyboard, and that's what I learned.

The subject in school is a past event so use past tense 'was' and 'taught' (not 'teach'). Remove the duplicated 'that's'. Use simple past 'learned' to match timeframe.

× I improve my typing by practicing every day and type it.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day and typing.

After 'by' use the -ing form 'typing' not the base form 'type'. The phrase 'type it' is awkward; 'typing' alone completes the gerund phrase.

× There's is a link that it measures your words per minute.

✓ There is a link that measures your words per minute.

Do not combine 'there's' and 'is'; use 'There is'. Do not add the redundant pronoun 'it' after 'that'. Use 'measures' as the verb of the relative clause.