Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar/word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy ("computer on my smartphones").

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and makes editing simple. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize notes on my laptop or smartphone, which saves me time when studying.

제안: Fix tense and article errors and make the response more natural: give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason with a linking word. Use precise vocabulary ("practice typing," "speed and accuracy").

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I'm preparing for exams. For instance, I do timed typing exercises to improve my typing speed and accuracy, which helps me complete practice papers faster.

제안: Provide a clear time statement and one specific detail about how you learned. Correct grammar ("I learned to type at age seven"), and use linking words to connect sentences.

예시: I learned to type when I was seven. At primary school we had a computer class where the teacher gave us regular typing exercises, so I practiced little by little until I became faster.

제안: Make the procedure clear and grammatically correct. Use linking words (first, then, finally) and specific details (timed practice, websites or apps). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. First, I choose an essay or article and then I type it under a time limit; after that I check errors and focus on troublesome letters. Finally, I repeat the exercise several times to increase speed and accuracy.

× Well, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to edit some notes on my computer on my smartphones.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to edit notes on my computer or on my smartphone.

The original sentence mixes singular and plural pronouns and devices incorrectly ('my computer on my smartphones'). Replace with correct parallel structure and singular/plural consistency: 'on my computer or on my smartphone.' Also remove 'some' which is unnecessary before 'notes.' Ensure preposition and noun agreement.

× Yes, I type on my laptops every day because I just preparing my examination so I need to practice my type, speed and accuracy.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I am just preparing for my examination, so I need to practice my typing, speed, and accuracy.

Errors include incorrect plural 'laptops' when referring to a single personal device, missing auxiliary verb for present continuous ('am preparing'), missing preposition 'for' after 'preparing', wrong noun form 'type' should be 'typing', and missing commas for clarity. Quantifier/number and verb form issues corrected.

× Well, I learned typing on the keyboard when I was 7.

✓ Well, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was seven.

Use the correct verb pattern 'learned to + infinitive' (learned to type) rather than 'learned typing.' Also write numbers as words in formal speech ('seven'). This fixes the verb form and makes the sentence natural.

× At primary school we had a lesson about computer skills which need way to practice typing on the computer.

✓ At primary school we had a lesson about computer skills that taught ways to practice typing on the computer.

Original uses incorrect relative clause and verb agreement ('which need way to practice'). Change to 'that taught ways to practice' for correct meaning and subject-verb agreement. Also pluralize 'way' to 'ways' and ensure verb matches the subject.

× While I improve my typing by practicing some essays and articles.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing with essays and articles.

The original begins with 'While' which makes an incomplete subordinate clause; it lacks a main clause. Rephrase as a complete sentence. Also 'practicing some essays and articles' is awkward; use 'practicing with' or 'typing essays and articles.'

× So first I need to find an essay or a article then I need to type in the regularly that can help me improve my typing speed and.

✓ So first I need to find an essay or an article, then I need to type it regularly to help me improve my typing speed and accuracy.

Errors include wrong article before a vowel sound ('a article' should be 'an article'), missing object pronoun ('type it'), unnecessary preposition 'in', missing word 'accuracy' at the end, and punctuation issues. Rephrase for clarity and correct article usage.