Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I prefer typing to handwriting.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct collocations (e.g. “more efficient,” “organize my ideas,” “edit my words”).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, when I have a heavy workload I can organize my ideas quickly and edit my words effortlessly, which helps me meet deadlines.

제안: Answer directly, then give one specific detail. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words (e.g. “I usually use a laptop because…”). Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum and be coherent.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I study online and do homework on it. As a result, I find the laptop keyboard comfortable and responsive when I spend long hours in front of the screen.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and then describe progression with correct grammar. Use linking words such as “at first” and “now” to show contrast. Avoid filler words like “so” repeated frequently.

예시: I learned to type in secondary school. At first I typed slowly because I kept looking at the keys, but after years of using computers for work and study I have become much more fluent and accurate.

제안: Give a direct answer and one or two specific methods with correct phrasing. Replace vague expressions with concrete actions (e.g. “daily practice,” “use typing software,” “set timed tests”). Keep sentences short and fluent.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For instance, I do timed typing exercises and regularly type emails and reports, which has helped me become faster over time.

× So typing is much faster and more efficiency, so I can do with heavy workload and allow to organize my idea more clearly and edit my word effortlessly.

✓ Typing is much faster and more efficient, so I can handle a heavy workload, organize my ideas more clearly, and edit my words effortlessly.

The word 'efficiency' is a noun but an adjective 'efficient' is required to modify 'typing.' 'Do with heavy workload' is incorrect collocation; use 'handle a heavy workload.' 'Idea' and 'word' should be plural when speaking generally. Use parallel verb forms for a list: 'handle,' 'organize,' 'edit.' Suggestion: replace nouns with appropriate adjectives and make nouns plural when generalizing.

× So I think that laptop keyboard used for studying online, do homework and relying emails from workplace and about keyboard so when I spend hour in front of the screen so I use keyboard in order to feel comfortable and responsive.

✓ I think I use a laptop keyboard for studying online, doing homework, and replying to emails from work. Because I often spend hours in front of the screen, I use a keyboard that feels comfortable and responsive.

Original sentence has poor clause structure and incorrect verb forms. 'Used for' should be 'use... for' to match subject and tense. 'Do homework' requires gerund 'doing.' 'Relying emails' is incorrect; use 'replying to emails.' 'From workplace' should be 'from work.' 'When I spend hour' needs plural 'hours' and an article. Break into two sentences for clarity and correct tense agreement. Suggestion: use parallel gerunds for listed activities and separate reason clause with correct noun number.

× So I think that laptop keyboard used for studying online, do homework and relying emails from workplace and about keyboard so when I spend hour in front of the screen so I use keyboard in order to feel comfortable and responsive.

✓ I think I use a laptop keyboard for studying online, doing homework, and replying to emails from work. Because I often spend hours in front of the screen, I use a keyboard that feels comfortable and responsive.

The speaker intends to describe habitual present actions, so present simple 'use' is needed rather than past or passive forms. Ensure verbs describing habitual activities are in present simple and gerunds are used after 'for.' Suggestion: use present simple and gerunds for routines.

× So well I remember correctly. So is it in my secondary school? So at first type I type quite slowly because I keep looking at the screen and the keys. And after years using computer for work and study so right now I gradually much more fluent and accurate.

✓ If I remember correctly, it was in secondary school. At first I typed quite slowly because I kept looking at the screen and the keys. After years of using computers for work and study, I am now gradually much more fluent and accurate.

Child clauses refer to past events: use past tense 'was' and 'typed' and 'kept.' 'After years using computer' needs 'after years of using computers.' 'Right now I gradually much more fluent and accurate' mixes present and adverb placement; correct form is 'I am now gradually much more fluent and accurate.' Suggestion: use past tense for past events and correct prepositional phrase 'years of' and proper present progressive where appropriate.

× So I improve typing by daily basic. So I just uh, daily practice it. And since I have to write emails report regularly so I naturally become faster over time.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day. I just practice daily, and since I have to write email reports regularly, I naturally become faster over time.

'Improve typing' needs possessive 'my typing' or 'improve at typing.' 'By daily basic' is not correct; use 'by practicing every day' or 'daily practice.' 'Practice' as a verb requires the gerund form 'practicing' in 'by' phrases. 'Emails report' should be 'email reports.' Suggestion: use gerunds after 'by' and ensure noun compounds are correct (email report), and maintain consistent adverb placement.

× So I think that laptop keyboard used for studying online, do homework and relying emails from workplace and about keyboard so when I spend hour in front of the screen so I use keyboard in order to feel comfortable and responsive.

✓ I think I use a laptop keyboard for studying online, doing homework, and replying to emails from work. Because I often spend hours in front of the screen, I use a keyboard that feels comfortable and responsive.

Incorrect prepositions: 'used for' should be 'use... for' (verb and preposition), 'from workplace' should be 'from work,' and 'in front of the screen' is correct but needs plural 'hours.' Also 'replying to emails' requires preposition 'to.' Suggestion: check common prepositional phrases like 'reply to,' 'from work,' and 'in front of.'

× And after years using computer for work and study so right now I gradually much more fluent and accurate.

✓ After years of using computers for work and study, I am now gradually much more fluent and accurate.

The sentence lacks a proper verb to agree with the subject; 'I gradually much more fluent' is missing 'am.' Also 'computer' should be plural 'computers' when speaking generally. Use 'I am now' for present state. Suggestion: include the correct linking verb 'am' and match singular/plural nouns appropriately.