Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question with a clear preference and brief reasons, but you can improve by using one linking phrase and a slightly more specific example to make it richer and more coherent. Also avoid repeating words (e.g., "take my assignment and notes") and keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient, especially for schoolwork. For example, I type lecture notes and assignments on my laptop, which helps me organize and edit them quickly.

제안: Your answer is direct but contains repetition and an unclear phrase (“doing pieces”). Improve by giving one clear topic sentence, then a supporting detail with a linking word. Replace vague or incorrect words and avoid listing the same idea twice.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. I use it mainly for studying and writing assignments, so I often spend several hours typing each day.

제안: The answer has grammar, pronunciation and clarity problems that make it hard to follow. Start with a clear past-time phrase, correct verb forms, and add a short detail about how you learned. Use linking words for clarity.

예시: I learned to type in high school when I had to use computers for most of my coursework. At first I practiced with typing exercises, and over time my speed and accuracy improved.

제안: Your answer communicates the main idea but is filled with hesitations and repetition. Remove filler words, use one linking word (for example, "because" or "by"), and provide a specific method or routine to show concrete improvement steps.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily, mainly by typing assignments and working on my thesis. I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I usually take my assignment and notes on my laptop.

✓ I usually take my assignments and notes on my laptop.

The original uses singular 'assignment' where plural 'assignments' better matches context with 'notes' and general routines. This is a pluralization issue (use plural to agree with typical multiple tasks). Suggest using plural for countable nouns when referring to repeated or multiple items.

× Yes I do. I use my laptop every day for studying or doing assignments or doing pieces.

✓ Yes, I do. I use my laptop every day for studying, doing assignments, or working on projects.

The original sentence is awkward and contains 'doing pieces' which is unclear. Improve parallel structure by using consistent gerund phrases: 'studying, doing assignments, or working on projects.' Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× Will learn how to tie when I in high school I improve my ties by using computer for school work.

✓ I learned how to type when I was in high school; I improved my typing by using a computer for schoolwork.

Multiple errors: wrong verb tense/form ('Will learn' should be past 'learned'), incorrect verbs ('tie' and 'ties' instead of 'type'/'typing'), missing auxiliary 'was' for past continuous location, and missing article 'a' before 'computer'. Also 'schoolwork' is one word. This corrects tense, verb form, and articles to match past events.

× Uh, I improve my typing by practice every day because, uh, I have the assignment work such as the, the thesis work, my so my typing speed has become much better.

✓ Uh, I improve my typing by practicing every day because I have assignment work, such as my thesis, so my typing speed has become much better.

Use the gerund 'practicing' after 'by' (preposition + -ing form). Remove duplicated words and reorder for clarity: 'assignment work' is awkward; 'assignment work such as my thesis' becomes 'assignment work, such as my thesis.' Replace 'my so my' with 'so my' to fix redundancy. This addresses incorrect verb form after preposition and general sentence structure.